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Predator's agony.
Would a lion ask for help?
Or the expected dominance of such creature would turn aching moans into roars for those who listen?
I'm not sad because I want to.
I can't control life pouring out
even though I can see it.
Would the prey even care?
Or the expected dominance of such creature would turn aching moans into roars for those who listen?
I'm not sad because I want to.
I can't control life pouring out
even though I can see it.
Would the prey even care?
Published 18th Apr 2020
| Edited 8th Sep 2020
Author's Note
I'm not a lion though.
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18th Apr 2020 8:31am
Fight to get back into the light, be the king of the jungle. Keep on writing.
A lion would never ask for help even when in need of it
The nature of the beast is also its folly
As people even with the spirit of lions the nature of community can not be escaped
Together we rise and fall
The nature of the beast is also its folly
As people even with the spirit of lions the nature of community can not be escaped
Together we rise and fall
23rd Apr 2020 9:17am
Would the prey even care?
When I think about
the chimpanzee minded mentality people
your words fit Perfectly
I feel like
I have a lot to say
but most of the time
I don't know how,
to whom.
And what is the purpose
of words
if not to communicate?
Why do I
want to say so much?
How is it done?
Words, words, words.
A million words
to a million people.
Who is even listening?
Would the prey even care?
Sorry about this
I just wanted to see
what it would sound like
Because your words
are what I feel
everyday
When I think about
the chimpanzee minded mentality people
your words fit Perfectly
I feel like
I have a lot to say
but most of the time
I don't know how,
to whom.
And what is the purpose
of words
if not to communicate?
Why do I
want to say so much?
How is it done?
Words, words, words.
A million words
to a million people.
Who is even listening?
Would the prey even care?
Sorry about this
I just wanted to see
what it would sound like
Because your words
are what I feel
everyday
24th Apr 2020 8:29am
Oh my God, I'm really touched by your comment!
I suppose you are listening to me as I am to you now.
I'm speechless for some reason. Just... Hi.
I suppose you are listening to me as I am to you now.
I'm speechless for some reason. Just... Hi.
24th Apr 2020 9:01am
Hi to you
please don't take this
the wrong way
I mean no disrespect
I came across your writing
purely by accident
and I still don't know
how
I was looking for something else
and you appeared
I'm glad you did
because what you wrote
about yourself
is what I feel
It's the first time
I've read something
that fits
Thank you
and thank you
for your comment
please don't take this
the wrong way
I mean no disrespect
I came across your writing
purely by accident
and I still don't know
how
I was looking for something else
and you appeared
I'm glad you did
because what you wrote
about yourself
is what I feel
It's the first time
I've read something
that fits
Thank you
and thank you
for your comment
