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Fell in Love..
I fell in love with her name
I fell in love with her presence
I fell in love with her pony tail
I fell in love with her kiss
I fell in love with her smile
I fell in love with her passion
I fell in love with her commitment
I fell in love with her devotion
I just fell in love...
I fell in love with her presence
I fell in love with her pony tail
I fell in love with her kiss
I fell in love with her smile
I fell in love with her passion
I fell in love with her commitment
I fell in love with her devotion
I just fell in love...
Published 17th Apr 2020
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17th Apr 2020 8:53am
17th Apr 2020 10:10am
Love the whole poem ... the structure of one stanza ... the building repetition ... then ... the sweet sweet release of the last line ...
