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Success is stalking you
Success is stalking you.
But still you run looking for it?
You'll always be ahead of it
But still miss the touch of it.
Slow down and
take a deep breath.
Or you would keep running
Till you meet death.
Turn around
and see what you have.
Gather your hardwork
And set them in the fire
Fire of perfection.
Success is here
Not beyond the line.
Show it the perfection
And let it make you shine.
But still you run looking for it?
You'll always be ahead of it
But still miss the touch of it.
Slow down and
take a deep breath.
Or you would keep running
Till you meet death.
Turn around
and see what you have.
Gather your hardwork
And set them in the fire
Fire of perfection.
Success is here
Not beyond the line.
Show it the perfection
And let it make you shine.
Published 17th Apr 2020
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17th Apr 2020 4:26am
Dear N,
Wonderfully insightful. I admire the opening sentences of each of your stanza’s. Appreciating what is right there in the moment always seems to be like holding water in your palm. Lovely reminder to give thanks for the day we’re in. Very nice write. H🌷
Wonderfully insightful. I admire the opening sentences of each of your stanza’s. Appreciating what is right there in the moment always seems to be like holding water in your palm. Lovely reminder to give thanks for the day we’re in. Very nice write. H🌷
18th Apr 2020 12:51pm
18th Apr 2020 12:51pm
17th Apr 2020 1:28pm
Nice write dear. I like the way you described it as stalking ,this resonated with me very much.
18th Apr 2020 12:51pm
