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Freestyle Verses (Rap)
A lyrical anomaly
An emperical error
Not for mom to see
To spare her from terror
Honestly
I’m on this beat
Like an overlord
on overload
I’ve gone overboard
Like a croakin’ toad
With spoken load
In broken code
I break barriers
Internationally,
Rationally
I’m passionately
Laser-pointed
On the issue
Not chasing paper
Like toilet tissue
Politically, analytically
Literally gone viral
This spiral
Is vital
For evolution
A revolution
A pivotal...
Change the way your mind thinks
Pull the drain and let your mind sink
Rest your body and your soul, friend
This is out of our control, man.
An emperical error
Not for mom to see
To spare her from terror
Honestly
I’m on this beat
Like an overlord
on overload
I’ve gone overboard
Like a croakin’ toad
With spoken load
In broken code
I break barriers
Internationally,
Rationally
I’m passionately
Laser-pointed
On the issue
Not chasing paper
Like toilet tissue
Politically, analytically
Literally gone viral
This spiral
Is vital
For evolution
A revolution
A pivotal...
Change the way your mind thinks
Pull the drain and let your mind sink
Rest your body and your soul, friend
This is out of our control, man.
Published 10th Apr 2020
Author's Note
I had a lot of fun with this... sort of an improvisation. I decided to write a rap completely from the top of my head, and this is what I came up with. No edits, no objectives, almost no grammar, just straight from the top of my head. EXCEPT for the end.
If anyone's curious, I was inspired by this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QWveXdj6oZU
I think any poet would find it interesting. In-depth discussion of poetic techniques in rap.
If anyone's curious, I was inspired by this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QWveXdj6oZU
I think any poet would find it interesting. In-depth discussion of poetic techniques in rap.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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11th Apr 2020 00:00am
Thanks for the video link. Learning to write to the flow of music is something that I want to accomplish. I haven't progressed to that level of artistry yet. I like your flow.
11th Apr 2020 00:27am
11th Apr 2020 1:18am
Okkkk this is so hard 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 and I love how u didnt take yourself seriously and had fun with it. I felt the flow in my head and I was nodding it myself. Keep it up, looking forward 4 more raps.
11th Apr 2020 1:58am
..sooo Cool, Love this!!!! I once wrote a song about TACOS but it ended up being more of a WRAP, lol.
11th Apr 2020 2:52am
"With spoken load
In broken code
I break barriers
Internationally,
Rationally
I’m passionately
Laser-pointed
On the issue"
"Politically, analytically
Literally gone viral
This spiral
Is vital
For evolution
A revolution
A pivotal..."
Time for return comments , regarding your words , my friend...
These two sections are excellent...well felt , well written , and
I could hear / feel them in the bones and flesh , resonating...
Keep this as an example of your power of rhyming magic , and move forward !
I can tell , you shall excel !
In broken code
I break barriers
Internationally,
Rationally
I’m passionately
Laser-pointed
On the issue"
"Politically, analytically
Literally gone viral
This spiral
Is vital
For evolution
A revolution
A pivotal..."
Time for return comments , regarding your words , my friend...
These two sections are excellent...well felt , well written , and
I could hear / feel them in the bones and flesh , resonating...
Keep this as an example of your power of rhyming magic , and move forward !
I can tell , you shall excel !
11th Apr 2020 3:53am
11th Apr 2020 3:57am
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2021 11:45am
11th Apr 2020 4:38am
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11th Apr 2020 7:32am
11th Apr 2020 11:12am
Well well well! A very crisp, smooth rollin off the top of the dome ink!! Impressive to say the least... bravo my friend! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 ✌🏾
13th Apr 2020 6:35am
15th Apr 2020 8:11am
