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omphalos
(nine of 30 - Official DUP NaPo/GloPoWrimo 2020)
i have been more than ready
i know because
the stars look like
street lamps, lighting
yellow tails of comets
black holes biting
my way out of
befuddled expanse
often driving me into
a dark astrophysical
place where I know
is not my home
but the hub of my
distress.
with my path now
illuminated &
mapped out
i can swap
illusion for ascent
to the multiverse
my celestial
sanitorium
awaits. . .
__________________
#NaPoWriMo2020
70 words
58 unique
i have been more than ready
i know because
the stars look like
street lamps, lighting
yellow tails of comets
black holes biting
my way out of
befuddled expanse
often driving me into
a dark astrophysical
place where I know
is not my home
but the hub of my
distress.
with my path now
illuminated &
mapped out
i can swap
illusion for ascent
to the multiverse
my celestial
sanitorium
awaits. . .
__________________
#NaPoWriMo2020
70 words
58 unique
Published 9th Apr 2020
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9th Apr 2020 3:55pm
9th Apr 2020 4:01pm
aaaaah my Beautiful Sister
am ever appreciative of Your read
and kind praise
Honored for the RL add
am ever appreciative of Your read
and kind praise
Honored for the RL add
9th Apr 2020 4:09pm
9th Apr 2020 4:12pm
i usually spill how i feel
or what is going on within and without me
appreciate the love
thank You
or what is going on within and without me
appreciate the love
thank You
9th Apr 2020 4:37pm
I loved all of this but especially the last stanza which is so perfect. got to me totally.
9th Apr 2020 4:40pm
makes my face wet to know
some Frequencies
" get-me "
thank You for the kind praise and comments
Honored for the RL add
some Frequencies
" get-me "
thank You for the kind praise and comments
Honored for the RL add
9th Apr 2020 11:14pm
Life is a little clearer...fuzzy still here... brought to mind this song. https://youtu.be/wJVpihgwE18
9th Apr 2020 11:59pm
Damnit! That 1st comment written by the Vietnam Vet had me in tears reading His experiences during those times.
Anyways..........i love when our spills cause us to remember songs and music.
Perfect song to go with this spill, Brother
Anyways..........i love when our spills cause us to remember songs and music.
Perfect song to go with this spill, Brother
10th Apr 2020 3:44am
Dear T,
Beautiful write that made me think of working my way toward my final stop in life. I wanted to kind of keep going for this mystical ride. Lovely. H🌷
Beautiful write that made me think of working my way toward my final stop in life. I wanted to kind of keep going for this mystical ride. Lovely. H🌷
10th Apr 2020 6:04am
Once You accomplish all that Your Guides
lead You to do
why wait around?
i am eager to see what's next.
thank You for the kind share and praise
lead You to do
why wait around?
i am eager to see what's next.
thank You for the kind share and praise
11th Apr 2020 1:18pm
I’ve read this several times and can’t quite find adequate words for the feeling it evokes. It’s beautiful.
11th Apr 2020 5:00pm
i think maybe i should sleep less more often
as it's liken to being in an altered state of being
i had skipped a night's worth of sleeping when i spilled this.
thank You for the kind share
and
Honored for the RL add
as it's liken to being in an altered state of being
i had skipped a night's worth of sleeping when i spilled this.
thank You for the kind share
and
Honored for the RL add
