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NaPoWrimo 5/30 Splitting Ifs
Wily guile vice sight / Filed for inner trials / Whether “For every mile a thousand fights” / Or just wild for the night / Style compiled like a GodChild’s ziggurat / Spicy chops / Icy Hot / Tiger Balm / The real higher calm / Comes with birdsong / Falun Gong / Croon from beyond / Hidden rooms / Sarah Winchester’s tune / Psychic atomic bomb / Flowing alarming ways / Marvin Gaye’s “What’s going on?” / Color of a moan / Mulling in tones / Pulling for home / Culling my zone / Fully grown means owning up to every mistake / Alone means no faking / Intuition breath awakening / Steaks, salt and cheddar / Who ever staked assaults for cheddar? / Don’t fault the letters / By default a petter of lawn ornaments / Course just sits like a chorus of heuristics / Sorting shit / Sport of quips / The Force of “If?”
Published 6th Apr 2020
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- Edited 9th Apr 2020 5:57pm
9th Apr 2020 5:54pm
At first I thought the title was "Spliffing Its" LOL
There is sooooo much in here to dig into, I almost feel at a loss of where to start.
Sarah Winchester is a familiar name and if she is to be associated with "Hidden rooms", I would say that's a huge What If because it throws everything known ( about her ) into chaos ( her house being a work of art that was meant to be appreciated ).
This is a phenomenal NaPo offering.
"By default a petter of lawn ornaments"
That cracks me up to high hell when I think about it!
There is sooooo much in here to dig into, I almost feel at a loss of where to start.
Sarah Winchester is a familiar name and if she is to be associated with "Hidden rooms", I would say that's a huge What If because it throws everything known ( about her ) into chaos ( her house being a work of art that was meant to be appreciated ).
This is a phenomenal NaPo offering.
"By default a petter of lawn ornaments"
That cracks me up to high hell when I think about it!
10th Apr 2020 1:56am
Spliffing random its would be the coolest talent, lol
I've long dreamed of doing an overnight at Winchester mansion, finding rooms unmapped, unopen during tour.
Thanks for catching the nuances, Johnny!
I've long dreamed of doing an overnight at Winchester mansion, finding rooms unmapped, unopen during tour.
Thanks for catching the nuances, Johnny!
