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Take My Hand
I will show you the way
To darker nights
And brighter days
If you take my hand and follow me
A whole new world in here
A place of peace
With nothing to fear
So many beautiful things to see
It's an endless maze
To explore
For days
With no dead ends to find
The possibilities are endless
Only your limits
And your senses
The only boundaries in your mind
Your dreams can become real
You can relax
you can feel
And be mine for the rest of your days
If you just take my hand and follow me
I will guide you through
And help you see
If you let me show you the way
To darker nights
And brighter days
If you take my hand and follow me
A whole new world in here
A place of peace
With nothing to fear
So many beautiful things to see
It's an endless maze
To explore
For days
With no dead ends to find
The possibilities are endless
Only your limits
And your senses
The only boundaries in your mind
Your dreams can become real
You can relax
you can feel
And be mine for the rest of your days
If you just take my hand and follow me
I will guide you through
And help you see
If you let me show you the way
Published 6th Apr 2020
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7th Apr 2020 3:07am
How sweet and kind, Wh1skey... This was a beautiful expression of your love and your sincerity :)
7th Apr 2020 7:41am
Thank you NB
Both for your kind words and stopping by to read my work.
I am glad you enjoyed it
Both for your kind words and stopping by to read my work.
I am glad you enjoyed it
12th Apr 2020 8:26pm
Just read over this again in replying to your comment... Just wanted to say, you're a really good writer, and a talented artist. Thanks for your support and friendship, even if it's from afar. You've been good to me, and I don't feel like I always take the time to express that in proper words. I really do appreciate you a lot.
13th Apr 2020 10:17pm
speechless
Thank you again NB
I enjoy reading your work, and you are definitely welcome.
13th Apr 2020 10:16pm
Beautiful ... just the right amount of sprinkling of rhyme ... love love love that ... a definite keeper ...
13th Apr 2020 10:19pm
Thank you for your kind words LilDragonFly
I am so glad to hear you enjoyed this lil piece :)
I am so glad to hear you enjoyed this lil piece :)
13th May 2020 11:18pm
13th May 2020 11:21pm
Im glad you liked it :)
Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and read some of my work
Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and read some of my work
10th Jun 2020 8:59pm
24th Jul 2020 10:54pm
I did not see this comment pop up on my radar, and apologize for my delay.
Thank you for your kind and encouraging words, and for taking the time to stop in and view my work.
Thank you for your kind and encouraging words, and for taking the time to stop in and view my work.
24th Jul 2020 11:19pm
Love this. Thats why the erotica thread is great you can highlight old spills to a new audience
24th Jul 2020 11:25pm
I am glad you liked it
And agree totally ... sometimes it’s good to go into the vault and blow dust off the oldies
Thanks AP
And agree totally ... sometimes it’s good to go into the vault and blow dust off the oldies
Thanks AP
24th Jul 2020 11:25pm
I am glad you liked it
And agree totally ... sometimes it’s good to go into the vault and blow dust off the oldies
Thanks AP
And agree totally ... sometimes it’s good to go into the vault and blow dust off the oldies
Thanks AP
24th Jul 2020 11:25pm
This feeling I have from reading your words reminds me of how in my dreams, an appearance of some disjointed shadow speaks similarly to me through the cover of night and sleepy fog. I startle myself awake for some reason...
left with an undeniable sense of wanting.
Cannot wait until I find him.
Same feeling now.
Ty for tapping into my secret of secrets
Wonderful poem
*tips hat
left with an undeniable sense of wanting.
Cannot wait until I find him.
Same feeling now.
Ty for tapping into my secret of secrets
Wonderful poem
*tips hat
24th Jul 2020 11:29pm
I am glad you enjoyed it blue
And with time and a sprinkle of good old fashioned patience I have no doubt you will find him one day.
Whatever you do though blue, don’t ever settle for anything but the right one
And with time and a sprinkle of good old fashioned patience I have no doubt you will find him one day.
Whatever you do though blue, don’t ever settle for anything but the right one
24th Jul 2020 11:29pm
I am glad you enjoyed it blue
And with time and a sprinkle of good old fashioned patience I have no doubt you will find him one day.
Whatever you do though blue, don’t ever settle for anything but the right one
And with time and a sprinkle of good old fashioned patience I have no doubt you will find him one day.
Whatever you do though blue, don’t ever settle for anything but the right one
