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Re. the kites fly but I don't
3rd Apr 2020 4:37pm
Re. the kites fly but I don't
3rd Apr 2020 4:56pm
Re. the kites fly but I don't
3rd Apr 2020 5:47pm
Oh my gawsh Nomoth....i don't know how anyone could have penned this sense of restlessness and loss...any more eloquently
I small in my cup....i am a sober alcoholic, it has "smallen" me to miniscule at times...
For your wants and demons to find flight, for that longing only to be set free, and just out of reach....through window, the wings of birds and in the dwelling of stars.....ugh...a blow to my tummy and if only to breathe
Deeply
Exhale those wounds
I small in my cup....i am a sober alcoholic, it has "smallen" me to miniscule at times...
For your wants and demons to find flight, for that longing only to be set free, and just out of reach....through window, the wings of birds and in the dwelling of stars.....ugh...a blow to my tummy and if only to breathe
Deeply
Exhale those wounds
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Re. the kites fly but I don't
3rd Apr 2020 8:22pm
Re. the kites fly but I don't
She said that you were amazingly unbounded and indeed you are.
Phenomenally written as are all your museful pieces. Lovely job
Phenomenally written as are all your museful pieces. Lovely job
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Re. the kites fly but I don't
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2020 5:23pm
9th Apr 2020 5:22pm
Nomoth, are you sure you weren't delivered to us through a time traveling mailbox? I swear, reading your entries is like walking into another century where poets are as revered as alchemists. NaPo slam dunk.
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Re: Re. the kites fly but I don't
thank you JB. honestly, i know it seems that i have spent loads of time on these and its been a thrill just to know that anyone would like this stuff, but i had the images first for a quite a while and always wanted reason to use them to inspire some written related to the image work. your comment is insane btw made me laugh lol. thanks again.
Re. the kites fly but I don't
11th May 2020 3:34am
This is beautiful, such a worthy runner up in the April PoM. The stanza rolling 'in the roof there is a skylight' is absolutely stunning. Visuals are epic too. All the best x
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Re: Re. the kites fly but I don't
11th May 2020 7:34pm