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Confined inside a mental prison
My brain feels like a prison and I am confined in this dark isolating cell,
It feels like all I have left is my faith, so I am praying to my guardian angel.
My soul feels like shattered glass piercing my heart with every breath I take,
All these emotions at once feels like I'm dragging around heavy weights and it has made my body ache.
It feels like all I have left is my faith, so I am praying to my guardian angel.
My soul feels like shattered glass piercing my heart with every breath I take,
All these emotions at once feels like I'm dragging around heavy weights and it has made my body ache.
Published 2nd Apr 2020
| Edited 19th Dec 2020
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2nd Apr 2020 4:55am
Nice poem my only critique is that I think it should be a little longer to express more emotion but I like it regardless
2nd Apr 2020 7:09am
I agree with the person above, just don't mention your emotions, dive deeper into what you really feel and see how it affects the poem!
3rd Apr 2020 00:55am
11th Apr 2020 2:32am
