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Killing season
You came like a lion
For my heart
But remember
It's the lioness
That does the hunting
For my heart
But remember
It's the lioness
That does the hunting
Published 27th Mar 2020
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28th Mar 2020 8:09am
28th Mar 2020 9:25am
yes, it can be mushy, and it surely does leave a scar (like a lion... no no ? okay) :)))
29th Mar 2020 3:12am
Dear A,
A cautionary tale if ever there was one, and if only I knew this 25 years ago. I’d have done the capturing and not the other way around, dang it. Clever very clever write. Engaging and educational wrapped into a bite sized meal. Awesome. H🌷
A cautionary tale if ever there was one, and if only I knew this 25 years ago. I’d have done the capturing and not the other way around, dang it. Clever very clever write. Engaging and educational wrapped into a bite sized meal. Awesome. H🌷
29th Mar 2020 1:09pm
Well, I wish I knew it a while ago too.
That's the problem, most people who are "captured" lose themselves at some point, and the ones that go hunting end up going away. It doesn't matter who's who, is just our nature, sometimes we hunt, sometimes we are the prey. And we must learn to accept it.
Ana
That's the problem, most people who are "captured" lose themselves at some point, and the ones that go hunting end up going away. It doesn't matter who's who, is just our nature, sometimes we hunt, sometimes we are the prey. And we must learn to accept it.
Ana
