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pajama tops and butt cheeks (entry)
"How many 75 years-old men,
do you think have a lovely,
curvy woman with only her pajama top on.
butt cheeks half-exposed and
Huggable botties on her feet,
standing in their living rooms?"
He said:
"Just how little kids
get new barbies,
but without the whole creativity;
They play dress-up for a while
Men don't know what to do next,
They just
get new barbies."
do you think have a lovely,
curvy woman with only her pajama top on.
butt cheeks half-exposed and
Huggable botties on her feet,
standing in their living rooms?"
He said:
"Just how little kids
get new barbies,
but without the whole creativity;
They play dress-up for a while
Men don't know what to do next,
They just
get new barbies."
Published 28th Mar 2020
Author's Note
this is an entry for "pajama bottoms and butt cheeks" hosted by @elsiesan, I find this topic very modern, actual, a bit avantgarde. Even though is fun to play with fire, and there can be many funny responses to a question like that, this is our reality, it happens many times and it is heartbreaking. Girls used to throw away and get new dolls when they were little, men do it when they are old.
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28th Mar 2020 10:20am
28th Mar 2020 11:34am
Dear A,
An extremely clever piece with fabulous insight. Your authors note is a work of art also. Brought a smile (more like a snort and smirk) when I read it of agreement to your observation and astuteness. Good luck in the comp. Well done. H🌷
An extremely clever piece with fabulous insight. Your authors note is a work of art also. Brought a smile (more like a snort and smirk) when I read it of agreement to your observation and astuteness. Good luck in the comp. Well done. H🌷
28th Mar 2020 5:08pm
thank you so much, I am really glad I made you smile, that was the intention ♥
I don't really agree with you. Every old man needs to respect the woman that was by his side for 40 years. Why do men think they deserve fresh meat when they don't even know how to cook?
And this is coming from a very young woman, who appreciates young and older men as well.
but thank you for the kind words, I truly appreciate them
And this is coming from a very young woman, who appreciates young and older men as well.
but thank you for the kind words, I truly appreciate them
