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This dance
They turn
Dramatic drop from swing of hair
Patchouli clouds arising
To elevate their own despair
From suffering to surviving
Hands find flesh
And mighty knead
What familiar places they both concede
Lascivious giggles bubble up
Where for art thou man?
Who gives a fuck!
Dramatic drop from swing of hair
Patchouli clouds arising
To elevate their own despair
From suffering to surviving
Hands find flesh
And mighty knead
What familiar places they both concede
Lascivious giggles bubble up
Where for art thou man?
Who gives a fuck!
Published 22nd Mar 2020
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For comp...hey ladies
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More women should seek each other out. The man thing is passe. Never saw what straight women see in men. Women are so much more sensual, beautiful, and soft. Damn! You got those Sapphic vibes going high velocity, Girl. But seriously this could make a great manifesto for the modern woman. But done in a sensually poetic beauty so incredibly more appealing than a manifesto. :)
John
John
22nd Mar 2020 10:19pm
23rd Mar 2020 2:39am
Anonymous
24th Mar 2020 7:12pm
"Patchouli oil has long been used in traditional Asian medicine, especially in Malaysia, China and Japan. It is used to treat skin and hair problems, such as dermatitis, eczema, acne, dry chapped skin, dandruff, and oily scalp."
That's what I got when I looked patchouli up online. I think I will get some. great poem!
That's what I got when I looked patchouli up online. I think I will get some. great poem!
24th Mar 2020 10:39pm
Lol...im sure of all of that...but it smells amazing. ..its a common incense fragrance
It's very strong, "hippies" often wear it, or that's a stereotype i guess
Thanks for reading!
It's very strong, "hippies" often wear it, or that's a stereotype i guess
Thanks for reading!
25th Mar 2020 9:07pm
Hi Jen,
Your poem title has been included in my tribute poem honouring DUP poets:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/377602-deep-underground/
Be safe,
Jade🐾
Your poem title has been included in my tribute poem honouring DUP poets:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/377602-deep-underground/
Be safe,
Jade🐾
