My boobs

Yes indeed I totally love this journey of undressing you...respect

Hell yeah I will

Love to see the full outfit, I would more than take a bite, great write 🔥👌

Thanks for sharing your write

I love your picture! And you’re poem!

Hot descriptive write and imagery 🌷

Woo own it chica ;)

a titillating verse...great stat to day.....

Supply and Demand and my crystal ball says the demand will be high; so your poem is worth a lot. I'd be a taker. You had me at "Boobs".

I like both the  picture and the poem, they go well together. Would say yes to seeing a woman in a commando outfit.

Lol
As an small B cup I fear I'll never know the feeling
Fun write!

What I really like is the variation in rhyming scheme where each verse is different. Whenever I have flirted with that it has not really worked for me.

It flows nicely and when I got to the last line and it didn’t rhyme it shocked me into a different level of consciousness. I assume that was intent, in which case that is very clever and I might steal that technique. ;)

Hi Noble_Incubus,
If u read my poems you'll find that they usually rhyme but when they don't it just means I couldn't find a word that did rhyme. I'll check out your poems and let u know what I think.

I usually prefer poems that rhyme. Although I can’t think of anything suitable that rhymes with knickers. Hmm... I think I like it the way you wrote it. It seems to fit that the last line doesn’t rhyme.

Damn the breast are very beautiful write for a poem.  Keep on writing.

Hi Phantom2426, I will indeed keep writing you're the breastest!

Aw thnx for the lovely comment. Will you be writing again soon? I hope so.

Nice titty tasting poem.

I can relate to this and have to say It excited me as well.  With respect of course.

Thanks for the respect, Sexyseashelle, much love.

Your very welcome

I look forward to hopefully reading some of your writing if u decide to post something.

If you meant me I posted a couple and note still to come.  Thanks

I definitely did get caught by your clickbait nipples, girl.

Haha..thanks for taking the time to check out my work ;-)

Thx Didi3d ;-)

Yes to all the above, very thought provoking

You never know your luck ;-)

Love this perfect, descriptive writing.yes to all

you have inspired me today...thank you! Borrowed your phrases
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/381555-jane-is-my-name/

Do I have any takers?
Of course!!!