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Little Ponies
We remain too little to ride
And too wild to care..
Our only longing,
To shed our winter's hair...
And too wild to care..
Our only longing,
To shed our winter's hair...
Published 11th Mar 2020
Author's Note
This is a photo taken by me of my two ponies Jasmine and Daphne in the wild hills of Arkansas
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11th Mar 2020 9:32pm
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11th Mar 2020 9:38pm
Love where this took me. A perfect metaphor for the outsider in the social rodeo of life. I do so know the feeling my friend. Your ending was both humorous and meaningful extraordinaire. John
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12th Mar 2020 3:38pm
Dear J,
What a sweet write and darling photo! If only we would all be that well adjusted! I think this has just lifted about 600 pounds of daily stress from my shoulders reading this charming write! Absolutely lovely. H 🌷
What a sweet write and darling photo! If only we would all be that well adjusted! I think this has just lifted about 600 pounds of daily stress from my shoulders reading this charming write! Absolutely lovely. H 🌷
12th Mar 2020 3:47pm
Oh thank you doll.....im so happy to hear it
I just came back from feeding the ponies, dogs roosters and hens....and feel lighter myself
Enjoy your day!
I just came back from feeding the ponies, dogs roosters and hens....and feel lighter myself
Enjoy your day!
14th Mar 2020 6:11pm
minimalistic .., & reads such voluminously philosophical & spiritual in your brevity... feels the atomic miniscule of what the droplets of consciousness floats flows all over....as free & bare all... horses do take me to the aced feeling of racing in liberation whatever be the hurdles... juzme dear from your amazing poetry/pic & overall presentation.. Best for the comp!
