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Outcast Soul
Outcast confused
Soul is torn
between light and hell
I'm chasing
What is left of
my pathetic life
So let me go out
In a Blaze of Glory
Soul is torn
between light and hell
I'm chasing
What is left of
my pathetic life
So let me go out
In a Blaze of Glory
Written by
Phantom2426
(Francisco J Vera)
Published 10th Mar 2020
| Edited 11th Mar 2020
Author's Note
I wrote this a long time ago. Every get confused in life. But some good came out this when wrote I this poem.
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Re. Outcast Soul
10th Mar 2020 8:24pm
Nice poeting with this ... simple ... direct ... awesome line breaks ...
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11th Mar 2020 3:26am
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11th Mar 2020 3:28am
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Sep 2022 4:45am
12th Mar 2020 10:00am
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12th Mar 2020 2:55pm
Re. Outcast Soul
Anonymous
14th Mar 2020 3:59pm
I've felt the exact same way many times before, and I love how direct and to the point you were with this one. Am glad you're able to use writing in order to release those dark feelings from your system.

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15th Mar 2020 00:25am
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Anonymous
15th Mar 2020 8:53am
You're welcome sir.

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Re. Outcast Soul
15th Mar 2020 1:47am