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Ritual of the Outcast
Outcast is lost
Inside of himself
He wants to drink
the Loner's blood
But the Loner
must die
In order for the
outcast to
drink the
Loner's blood
To give him
Peace of Mind
Inside of himself
He wants to drink
the Loner's blood
But the Loner
must die
In order for the
outcast to
drink the
Loner's blood
To give him
Peace of Mind
Published 11th Mar 2020
Author's Note
I wrote this on 4-11-2017 I was angry with family , and these words came out.
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Anonymous
14th Mar 2020 3:55pm
Very well written and I'm glad you're able to fully express whatever comes to mind, but I'm truly sorry about your family problems my friend.
15th Mar 2020 00:19am
Anonymous
15th Mar 2020 8:52am
You're welcome and yes that is true sir.
15th Mar 2020 3:30am
15th Mar 2020 3:33am
Anonymous
10th Apr 2020 12:01pm
Powerful and dark. This rings home for me. Great feeling.
10th Apr 2020 7:36pm
