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Let’s get a bill passed.   (waltzing Matilda)

Once there was a madman
Trapped in a mind so very wrong
lies he’d create just to pray on the weak
so smartly he’d plot, wait and watch
he’s sick mind he’d spoil
So revolting such cold human being .

What if he kills a person for thrills
A shame no never did listen to me .
They said they did not have the evidence to lock him up.
Our Law is blind and it’s time that they see .

Down came the judge, I guess
he was real stumped ,
there’s no procedure for what he did see
So he just told him off but i knew it was not enough, I had no choice but to just let it be

What if some other case came to get judged
Another poor child with a mind that is sick
There sure will be blood on the hands of the law we trust .
How do we keep children safe from what they’ll see?

Let’s get a billed passed ,
No kids in hating arms
parental greed won’t push past our laws reach
Strict laws in place to preserve concerns of mental states
all parents need to be seen by a shrink

What if it’s real the
fears that I feel but
Nobody changes this one simple thing  
no dad or mum deserves to fear for their  little ones
alienation must be taken seriously
 

There once was a madman
Trapped in a mind so very wrong
Lies he did state in a courtroom
and this
cost him the loss of the right to raise a child because
family law
recognised mental risk

Wish that was true but
it just a dream because
the law overlooked a dads sick twisted lips
Psychological abuse was acknowledged then excused my son
now being raised with lies games
And mind tricks.

My Judge a rude one
Came to a conclusion
No use of the proof
Clearly stated was this
“This boy is harmed from the fact his father hates his mum, now this is posing a seriously high risk”

Once there was a mad mum
That couldn’t again see her son
court paved the way now the pain it runs deep
A mind that does bad things
cannot raise a stable kid,  
mental abuse laws should be enforced and very strict .

 


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Written by Jofec (Omei)
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Author's Note
Personal experience , this is urgent message . I want this to be something that taken seriously , there’s to many children being hurt by the lack help the law provides
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