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Duet D'Amour
Placed deep in your soil
pure essence of my being
mid-Winter planting
Heal my wounded heart
kind, terrestrial angel
embrace love unfeigned
pure essence of my being
mid-Winter planting
Heal my wounded heart
kind, terrestrial angel
embrace love unfeigned
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 29th Feb 2020
| Edited 1st Mar 2020
Author's Note
Regarding the second Senryu, when genuine love is given, don't doubt it, don't judge it, don't measure it by any preconceived notions of it's elements...accept it as a gift from the universe.
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Re. Duet D'Amour
29th Feb 2020 6:39pm
Re: Re. Duet D'Amour
1st Mar 2020 00:52am
Thank you so much, Soledad. I was in a romantic mood this morning...okay always, ha ha. I am glad you felt this one.
Re. Duet D'Amour
1st Mar 2020 00:41am
Re: Re. Duet D'Amour
1st Mar 2020 1:03am
ˇMuchas gracias querida Luna! Hay tanta belleza en lo romántico. Por eso me encanta escribir sobre eso. Todos nosotros merecemos un amor auténtico.
Re. Duet D'Amour
1st Mar 2020 9:41pm
Sophisticated and fine writing. I'm not familiar with senryu, but I love this.
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Re: Re. Duet D'Amour
1st Mar 2020 10:04pm
Thank you Sir Crow! A senryu is in haiku form but the subject matter is human nature whereas a haiku is written about nature. I appreciate, as always, your kind words of encouragement.☺️
Re. Duet D'Amour
3rd Mar 2020 7:22pm
Really sublime G_W. I've been over it a few times, letting it take root, as it were.
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Re: Re. Duet D'Amour
8th Mar 2020 5:32pm
Thank you so much, Daniel. I am always honored to have written something of consequence to one with such wisdom and insight as yourself 🙏
Re. Duet D'Amour
8th Mar 2020 4:57pm
Just discovered you. Your emotions favor how my mind thinks. Well written and thank you.
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Re: Re. Duet D'Amour
8th Mar 2020 5:38pm
I love finding kindred one who feel things as deeply I...a kindred emotional spirit. To borrow, what now has become a trite phrase, you had me at Adagio 😁. So much of my emotion is integrally tied to music
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8th Mar 2020 5:43pm
I love the dark in writing because I find truth in the dark. The dark is honest and sensual. The dark dosen't lie. I also like the beat of raw jazz.
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Re. Duet D'Amour
13th Mar 2020 5:42pm
Re: Re. Duet D'Amour
13th Mar 2020 9:34pm
Thank you so much, Jen! That you can see my heart in my writing, I don't think a poet can get any higher praise.
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Re: Re. Duet D'Amour
18th Mar 2020 3:50pm
Thank you so much, Lovey. I have missed your words of inspiration and encouragement.😘