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Comprehension Ascension
I Am An Artistic Gone Ballistic Word Player
Verbal Label Lay It Down Spinning Sayer
Do You Hear Not The Cage The Message
Do Not Want To Disparage Hood Rage
Letter To Letter Or Try To Make It Better
Pacesetter Still A Ever Clever Phrase Beggar
On Street In House Who You Meet When Out
Talk Hard Talk Real Who Are You What Feel
Navigate Potential As The Essential Influential
Residential Prehensile And Still Consequential
Got Plenty Of Heart Yet Still Deep Heavy Mental
Verbal Label Lay It Down Spinning Sayer
Do You Hear Not The Cage The Message
Do Not Want To Disparage Hood Rage
Letter To Letter Or Try To Make It Better
Pacesetter Still A Ever Clever Phrase Beggar
On Street In House Who You Meet When Out
Talk Hard Talk Real Who Are You What Feel
Navigate Potential As The Essential Influential
Residential Prehensile And Still Consequential
Got Plenty Of Heart Yet Still Deep Heavy Mental
Published 24th Feb 2020
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25th Feb 2020 3:40am
25th Feb 2020 5:51pm
I read this three times outloud and enjoyed it more each time
I eat words because they taste so gooood on my tongue
so do you I believe
I eat words because they taste so gooood on my tongue
so do you I believe
25th Feb 2020 6:04pm
I most especially do enjoy the feeling on my tongue ;
And the *right words* for the poem enhance the savory flavor ;
One must *stir* the senses with the proper ingredients
in the cauldron of language possibility...for taste , and effect...
Thank you , my friend , Calamity Gin !
And the *right words* for the poem enhance the savory flavor ;
One must *stir* the senses with the proper ingredients
in the cauldron of language possibility...for taste , and effect...
Thank you , my friend , Calamity Gin !
28th Feb 2020 00:34am
Metal health will drive you mad! Well composed sir. I agree, I also like the feel of the flow on my tongue, having read it aloud thrice also. Excellent. Truly.
28th Feb 2020 3:44am
*bows*
Many thanks , PenneyWyze...and muchly appreciated...
Blessings on you , and your works !
Many thanks , PenneyWyze...and muchly appreciated...
Blessings on you , and your works !
1st Mar 2020 8:33pm
