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Watch As It Morphs Into A Shittier Person
All those faces
and none of them smile,
creepy.
You'd think with that many facades
one of them could at least
pretend to be happy.
and none of them smile,
creepy.
You'd think with that many facades
one of them could at least
pretend to be happy.
Published 24th Feb 2020
Author's Note
My photo.
I wanted to use #fake but thats not an option. Im just gonna go with rain from now on because anything I choose isnt ever available....
I wanted to use #fake but thats not an option. Im just gonna go with rain from now on because anything I choose isnt ever available....
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24th Feb 2020 7:12pm
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24th Feb 2020 8:44pm
24th Feb 2020 8:51pm
Excellence ...Uh...rain!!!
I see/meet so many miserable people ...yes it to seems to follow characters everywhere, sad that most folks can't just be who they are openly ...I have never had a problem being myself...I actually like the stump.
I see/meet so many miserable people ...yes it to seems to follow characters everywhere, sad that most folks can't just be who they are openly ...I have never had a problem being myself...I actually like the stump.
25th Feb 2020 00:01am
You have summed up the human condition perfectly. Excellent nik.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
I'm sure you wouldn't like a fake smiler either. I sense your frustration with the human race in this write. Liking the sarcastic 'cheers' from that charming figure with the goblet. It's like she's saying, I'm gonna get shittier & if you don't like it, up yours. As a side issue, it's like she's almost human too.
I can relate. It reminds me of a guy I know
who transformed from sensitive dude with poor social skills
to total narcissist in what seemed like the blink of an eye.
People : cant live with'em, cant get the code for the red button.....
who transformed from sensitive dude with poor social skills
to total narcissist in what seemed like the blink of an eye.
People : cant live with'em, cant get the code for the red button.....
26th Feb 2020 00:20am
Stony blankness outlasts our glee. Fuck, they know something we don't, Scheherazade. 😆
26th Feb 2020 11:41am
in all brevity sums up the dark bleak world ...still up der so much so laden with their soulless existences . tat's reflective to eyes of truthful depths ..well done nik, in overallness!
