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In Bloom
To flowergirl
Flower fills me with delight
I read her through a troubled night
She inspires me with purple luv
And I thank the Lord above
She writes with a gentle flow
Leaving warmth, an afterglow
Her luv is generosity
Forget about ferocity
I possess a darkened attitude
So she has my gratitude
I am one inclined to brood
But reading her brightens my mood.
Flower fills me with delight
I read her through a troubled night
She inspires me with purple luv
And I thank the Lord above
She writes with a gentle flow
Leaving warmth, an afterglow
Her luv is generosity
Forget about ferocity
I possess a darkened attitude
So she has my gratitude
I am one inclined to brood
But reading her brightens my mood.
Author's Note
To one of my oldest friends here.
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Re. In Bloom
23rd Feb 2020 11:00pm
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23rd Feb 2020 11:12pm
Flowergirl has indeed been a comfort. She is capable of many moods, but is never harsh or unduly provocative. She sooths me whenever I read her. Thank you for the kind words, Josh!
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24th Feb 2020 00:04am
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24th Feb 2020 9:46pm
I'm glad you enjoyed this, nicoleafterjana. The title suggests her personality.
Re. In Bloom
24th Feb 2020 00:35am
Bravo Sir Crow! I'll have to make it a point to read Flowergirl again, it's been awhile. This is a very touching tribute to her, her work, and her friendship. I like this description of her serene manner, "Her luv is generosity, Forget about ferocity."
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24th Feb 2020 9:49pm
Her sensitivity brings out the serenity in me. I can be harsh in my writing, and thinking. Thank you Gahdess!
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24th Feb 2020 10:37pm
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24th Feb 2020 7:04am
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24th Feb 2020 9:52pm
Thank you SweetOblivion. This is perhaps a little out of character for me, but the subject inspires whatever gentleness I possess.
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24th Feb 2020 9:53pm
Re. In Bloom
26th Feb 2020 00:23am
Simple lift, that gem, we hold in our chest. Everyone needs that avenue of warmth to transcend this grind
I'm glad you found that special kind of love, crow.
https://youtu.be/OdT3tn1lWZo
I'm glad you found that special kind of love, crow.
https://youtu.be/OdT3tn1lWZo
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28th Feb 2020 9:16pm
I can't really say I've quite found it, but I'm working on it. Thank you Loki.
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Anonymous
28th Feb 2020 2:01am
Awe Crow........there are tears in my eyes.......I humbly thank you my friend.......you’re so precious......such a blessing in my life here.......I’m over joyed to have such graceful words written about me.......I’m thrilled to see so much in my ink.......thank you again I luv it........I hope we will be friends for a long time.......RL for me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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28th Feb 2020 9:18pm