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The 0thers
Theres a new star in the sky
I watch it each night as it orbits by
Looking in to the night sky
The others all seem to stand still
Yet this one seems to have free will~
I watch it each night as it orbits by
Looking in to the night sky
The others all seem to stand still
Yet this one seems to have free will~
Published 20th Feb 2020
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22nd Feb 2021 3:37am
I liked the premise of being an individual.
One the other hand, if its moving it could be a satellite, an alien, or a star in turmoil. Free will can be a blessing or a curse. They say the humanoids here on Earth have Free Will - They've done greatness (man on the moon) and tragedy (pick a war).
One the other hand, if its moving it could be a satellite, an alien, or a star in turmoil. Free will can be a blessing or a curse. They say the humanoids here on Earth have Free Will - They've done greatness (man on the moon) and tragedy (pick a war).
