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Fuck Society
Fuck society for all the things they have spoke
I hope one day their words they will choke
They have put a lable on me
Its way too late for an apology
They have made me a national statistic
No longer do they believe in individualistic
I have no longer a mind of my own
For we the people can no longer stand alone
I do not wish to be classified
For in which I should be able to decide
I no longer have the freedom of choice
I should be able to have my own voice
They treat me like a test subject
Stealing my thoughts for them to collect
I can no longer be the person I am
Feeding me bullshit like they give a damn
Many have paid for the freedom I've been given
Only to be limited for how I'm liven
"fuck society they can't have me,
I don't need society!"
I have fought for a better life
I guess I will have to wait until the afterlife
I won't be an outcast forever
For this society I will sever
I am tired of being what I'm told
No longer will I be controlled
For I am truly flesh and blood
I will no longer be ran thru the mud
I will stand up with my head so high
I will be strong to unclassify
To be my own person again
To free myself from their fucking playpen
We are all people they don't see
I don't think you will disagree
All of our voices should be heard
They want us to be quiet, and not say a word
I just have a message for those who rule
You are nothing but a fucking tool
So with the message wrote by me
I still don't need your fucking society.
I hope one day their words they will choke
They have put a lable on me
Its way too late for an apology
They have made me a national statistic
No longer do they believe in individualistic
I have no longer a mind of my own
For we the people can no longer stand alone
I do not wish to be classified
For in which I should be able to decide
I no longer have the freedom of choice
I should be able to have my own voice
They treat me like a test subject
Stealing my thoughts for them to collect
I can no longer be the person I am
Feeding me bullshit like they give a damn
Many have paid for the freedom I've been given
Only to be limited for how I'm liven
"fuck society they can't have me,
I don't need society!"
I have fought for a better life
I guess I will have to wait until the afterlife
I won't be an outcast forever
For this society I will sever
I am tired of being what I'm told
No longer will I be controlled
For I am truly flesh and blood
I will no longer be ran thru the mud
I will stand up with my head so high
I will be strong to unclassify
To be my own person again
To free myself from their fucking playpen
We are all people they don't see
I don't think you will disagree
All of our voices should be heard
They want us to be quiet, and not say a word
I just have a message for those who rule
You are nothing but a fucking tool
So with the message wrote by me
I still don't need your fucking society.
Published 6th Jan 2012
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6th Jan 2012 9:06am
your writing is growing here! good strength and resolve in this write, keep it up. [:
6th Jan 2012 9:22am
"I will stand up with my head so high
I will be strong to unclassify
To be my own person again
To free myself from their fucking playpen
We are all people they don't see
I don't think you will disagree
All of our voices should be heard
They want us to be quiet, and not say a word
I just have a message for those who rule
You are nothing but a fucking tool
So with the message wrote by me
I still don't need your fucking society."
these last few lines are so powerful...trust me it takes a lot to throw away the garb that 'they' are wanting u to put up on urself...its a lot harder to assert urself..and my dear friend as soon as we do the assertion, claiming and questioning, we are complete as an individual, its a sign of a change that is at hand...
well written as always...:)
I will be strong to unclassify
To be my own person again
To free myself from their fucking playpen
We are all people they don't see
I don't think you will disagree
All of our voices should be heard
They want us to be quiet, and not say a word
I just have a message for those who rule
You are nothing but a fucking tool
So with the message wrote by me
I still don't need your fucking society."
these last few lines are so powerful...trust me it takes a lot to throw away the garb that 'they' are wanting u to put up on urself...its a lot harder to assert urself..and my dear friend as soon as we do the assertion, claiming and questioning, we are complete as an individual, its a sign of a change that is at hand...
well written as always...:)
6th Jan 2012 9:28am
To me it's not so much as getting the right answer it's about asking the right questions. I agree the last few stanzas got pretty deep, but I started to write angry. Thank you very much for your compliment and your comment;)
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6th Jan 2012 9:36am
6th Jan 2012 11:08am
What a fantastic write! Wow! You never fail to awe me. You had me pulled in from the first line to the last. I felt myself getting angry with you. Phenomenal!
6th Jan 2012 12:19pm
Thank you ALOT Rachel your replies I await. Yeah it was a grrrrrrrr poem. I hate labels very much. Unless I have a toe tag on I am not a statistic. Thank you for your comment
Passionate and forceful, friend, when we write with our passions welling up inside us, our pieces take on a life of their own and seem to leap off the page at the reader. Good for you, vent baby let um have it without fear!
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
6th Jan 2012 6:10pm
( as he blushes ) Thank you very much Gypsy. I was mad when I started. Then it ended up me really being pissed. Can't do this: can't do fuck, to tell you "their" truth just to stab you in your fucking back. They can pucker up and kiss my ass!
6th Jan 2012 2:40pm
ohh yeah i soooo agree with you! I love your perspective! Thats exactly how i see society!! muhahaha i hope they choke and dieeeee!!!!! :) and btw thank you for sharing this very great poem for them to read and feel(hopefully) ashamed about.
6th Jan 2012 6:20pm
Thank you very much for agreeing with me. As far as they go " you can not play a battle of the wits with a unarmed person" in this case society. We are our own person; some of us put labels on people. You know what! So did Hitler... A big J. I always wanted to get "fuck you" tattooed on my eye lids. So when one of these so called society person talks to me... Just maybe I will get my point across. Too bad it's an impasse. Stalemate for you can't fix stupid. Now that's a label for them
6th Jan 2012 2:57pm
Truly a work of art! Loved it for some many reasons! From the topic choice to the use of words ans phrases c'est magnifique!!!
6th Jan 2012 6:28pm
My dear, thank you very much ( he tips his hat ). Their are thousands of people that watch Doctor Phil and Martha Stewart. It sickens me just to Capitolize their names. Always telling us about how to raise our children and how we should conform to their ideals. Well, you know what? Once more just to feel good " FUCK SOCIETY " I once again feel better.
6th Jan 2012 8:06pm
Stepping over us and deciding who goes where and who hears what. It's all a big fucking game to them. In my case, I'll live however I fucking want to, and they can just SHOVE IT.
With the biggest of smiles,
Chandler
With the biggest of smiles,
Chandler
27th Jan 2012 1:43am
Ms Chandler I love love love your passion. So full of " I'm not going to conform to shit attitude" makes me want to cheer for you; whoot whoot! Gosh I would love to go to Wal-Mart with you and have that fuct up wheel buggie race. That would be cool. Thank you for your comment!
16th Jan 2012 4:47pm
For those who possess the ability to do great things or are given better qualities then most,
could you really stand in the face of real power
and say i don't want it. Changing things to fit our needs seems to be our nature. But in the end where would we really be if everyone did what they want?
could you really stand in the face of real power
and say i don't want it. Changing things to fit our needs seems to be our nature. But in the end where would we really be if everyone did what they want?
16th Jan 2012 8:47pm
As twisted babble of your question is to say why do we have laws? They are only put in place for those who need them; not to know any better. Do you know the limits of my disassociation of society vs "power"? If you want or searching for the right answer you have to ask the right question. What you are trying to speak of is leading into anarchy! A true narcissuses will over analyze everything!
16th Jan 2012 11:42pm
I researched narcissism and it sounds as if your describing me as self-absorbed,conceited,elitism,
etc... How can you show people or teach anything them with this type of hostility. All im saying is your poem speaks many truths but in the end we still need to have a positive control over our way of life.
etc... How can you show people or teach anything them with this type of hostility. All im saying is your poem speaks many truths but in the end we still need to have a positive control over our way of life.
17th Jan 2012 1:20am
Positive...the only way to see it is to be on the negetive once or twice. I have fought many wars and have purple hearts. Now I fight for my medical and everything I was suppose to have. Self sacrifice is what it is; a sacrifice. Maybe we got off on the wrong foot. Your first comment showed no agreements in what I have said. You can not answer a question with a question.
19th Jan 2012 9:38pm
i feel the anger most deffinitely...but there is an underlying sence of sadness...like you just grasped not caring what others think of you not to long ago...its raw and beautiful. an insight to the ones who were left behind. my favorite poem on here so far ;)
Thorne I really do appreciate the sight of insight. Society rapes values and morals everyday. Getting closer to the worst intent...the New World Order. In which I will never conform to. I have went to war to ensure of our freedom of all. Just for society to kick me in the ass. My poem " what just went thru my mind" will explain more. Kudos on your comment.
27th Jan 2012 1:00am
27th Jan 2012 1:55am
Ms. Cort of most knee. Lol. Always glad to see you stop by. I never see you anymore. Hurts my feel things. Thank you for your comment. Don't be such a stanger
13th Feb 2012 1:01am
I bet there are more people in this world feelin like that than there are the people who decide the guidelines, but they're all together and therefore more forceful n powerful, it's all twisted eh!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great poem!!!!!!!!
13th Feb 2012 1:13am
We all have our GOD rights our own labels. MOM,DAD,SISTER,BROTHER, and so forth. We do not need their tags. Thank you for the comment dear
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Thanks a lot glad you enjoy it. why dnt you put it in your reading list.
