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WAR
Within the coming dawn
A revelation found within the riddle
Wobbling along the railings of ownership
A denial that is brittle
What if you claimed your part
a path left within your failings
A virtue left unpaid
A life left unobserved
Shielding yourself with false flattery
Sustainable grief that you have left
Exhaling a fog of confusion
Leaving crumbs to feed your bitch
Your tongue is not the answer
Nor is it the lies it spews from you
Your quill has finally splintered
as your confessions are off center
A revelation found within the riddle
Wobbling along the railings of ownership
A denial that is brittle
What if you claimed your part
a path left within your failings
A virtue left unpaid
A life left unobserved
Shielding yourself with false flattery
Sustainable grief that you have left
Exhaling a fog of confusion
Leaving crumbs to feed your bitch
Your tongue is not the answer
Nor is it the lies it spews from you
Your quill has finally splintered
as your confessions are off center
Published 17th Feb 2020
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17th Feb 2020 8:17pm
Thank you my dear poet! And, you are still here🌻🙌
I am so grateful for you taking the time to comment.
It's a raw subject, but I have been in one of those dark places lately.
At the end of the day, it's still a beautiful world.
😎
I am so grateful for you taking the time to comment.
It's a raw subject, but I have been in one of those dark places lately.
At the end of the day, it's still a beautiful world.
😎
17th Feb 2020 9:27pm
Dear L,
Brava. It can be a terribly dark world and the struggle to find that light and peace can seem impossible. Yet, human will and desire can illuminate and triumph and I so appreciate your poem for that revelation. Well done!! H🌷
Brava. It can be a terribly dark world and the struggle to find that light and peace can seem impossible. Yet, human will and desire can illuminate and triumph and I so appreciate your poem for that revelation. Well done!! H🌷
18th Feb 2020 9:46am
I completely agree with you dear Honoria! You are the definition of kindness and thoughtfulness. Even on a dreary piece like this, you always find the positive. Brava, to you as well dear poet.
L.✌
L.✌
18th Feb 2020 7:40am
18th Feb 2020 9:47am
