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Clearwater
On the other side of the world
Wherever you are
I will look at the sunrise
and paint this day with your words
Digging my toes into the beautiful white sand
I lay on my back and stare at the sky
Clouds of our lives illustrates itself into a dream
And I wonder, oh how I wonder, how lucky am I
I
I
Wherever you are
I will look at the sunrise
and paint this day with your words
Digging my toes into the beautiful white sand
I lay on my back and stare at the sky
Clouds of our lives illustrates itself into a dream
And I wonder, oh how I wonder, how lucky am I
I
I
Published 17th Feb 2020
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Anonymous
17th Feb 2020 9:03am
Beautiful
17th Feb 2020 10:01am
Anonymous
17th Feb 2020 7:26pm
Yup!
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17th Feb 2020 9:20pm
Dear L,
What a beautiful piece of paradise here. Picture and prose (I used that word for the alliteration of it all 😉). Kidding aside “Clouds of our lives illustrates itself into a dream ” this sent me on a charming daydream. I love clouds. Lovely sweet write. H🌷
What a beautiful piece of paradise here. Picture and prose (I used that word for the alliteration of it all 😉). Kidding aside “Clouds of our lives illustrates itself into a dream ” this sent me on a charming daydream. I love clouds. Lovely sweet write. H🌷
18th Feb 2020 9:53am
Dear H.
Thank you for the RL luv! I always needed to write something beautiful after I write about the dark side. It's like when I watch a horror movie. I have to listen to calm music or read something beautiful to shake off the yuck lol
L.🌻✌
Thank you for the RL luv! I always needed to write something beautiful after I write about the dark side. It's like when I watch a horror movie. I have to listen to calm music or read something beautiful to shake off the yuck lol
L.🌻✌
17th Feb 2020 9:56pm
A super cool poem written as if on a beach under the sky. Vivid and superb muse. Kudos.
Plz do read my newest poem too, I won't bother you for comments as it has enough comments already.
Plz do read my newest poem too, I won't bother you for comments as it has enough comments already.
18th Feb 2020 10:02am
Absolutely love your beautiful comment.
My muse is nature and wild smiles.
Thank you dear poet. I will check it out and I always comment on anything a poet puts effort into. I write because I am grateful for the platform to learn. If someone comments on what I wrote, they receive my efforts back of what they have given me.
Respectively,
Lagertha
My muse is nature and wild smiles.
Thank you dear poet. I will check it out and I always comment on anything a poet puts effort into. I write because I am grateful for the platform to learn. If someone comments on what I wrote, they receive my efforts back of what they have given me.
Respectively,
Lagertha
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