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Buoyancy Of Love
Naked
Feel naked
Then the grace of her
Permeates
As she glides
Clothed
Feel clothed
By her beauty
Every thought
Etched on my heart
Buoyancy of love
Keeps me afloat
Underneath
The strong current
Of passion
Enchanted
By the honey
From her
Soft inviting lips
Such bliss
Velvet and fire
Breathlessly addictive
She is
The purest drug
This soul needs
Published 16th Feb 2020
| Edited 11th Sep 2021
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17th Feb 2020 5:04am
It was very clever way to describe how the vulnerabilities were shed in each stanza. Still the little romantic, I see.;)
17th Feb 2020 5:36am
Maybe more of a romantic than I realise, still think I have a bro k for a heart
17th Feb 2020 12:55pm
AP, you're truly honing your craft through pure emotion. Your poetry is succinct, no bones about it—all meat.
11th Sep 2021 9:54pm
Savoring this lovely little gem..... The tenderness is like the warm sun, when you upturn your face a bit, to the sky... Closed eyes, warmth permeating, down to every single cell.....
Just tremendous!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Just tremendous!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
11th Sep 2021 10:04pm
