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Stranger Nights 3
She drops in the local bar
Sees an hombre with a scar
She decides to take a chance
Lead her to the floor to dance
He drives her to the nearest beach
The moon seems just out of reach
She decides to try her luck
Opens his pants, begins to suck
He is rigid as a gun
And she mouths him with the rising sun
But he won't grant her release
Allow her just a moment's peace
They drive off the ancient pier
No reticence, and little fear
The car sinking like a stone
At least she will not be alone.
Sees an hombre with a scar
She decides to take a chance
Lead her to the floor to dance
He drives her to the nearest beach
The moon seems just out of reach
She decides to try her luck
Opens his pants, begins to suck
He is rigid as a gun
And she mouths him with the rising sun
But he won't grant her release
Allow her just a moment's peace
They drive off the ancient pier
No reticence, and little fear
The car sinking like a stone
At least she will not be alone.
Published 16th Feb 2020
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16th Feb 2020 6:29pm
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16th Feb 2020 7:07pm
Well... some folks don'r or cannot leave the world empty Crow :D
You bleak and Mirthful fellow-I enjoyed this smile to the day!!!
You bleak and Mirthful fellow-I enjoyed this smile to the day!!!
16th Feb 2020 7:15pm
I was trying for noir with a touch of black comedy. I'm glad it worked for you. Thank you souladareatease!
17th Feb 2020 1:28am
I'm glad this earned your laugh. Thank you, Grace. No, that gun didn't get a chance to discharge, sadly.
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17th Feb 2020 3:50am
Wow Crow.......this is wicked.......didn’t see that ending coming.......luv this.......up luv & hugs xo :)
18th Feb 2020 9:39pm
I have a thing for surprise endings. Sometimes they work, sometimes not. I'm glad this did for you. Thank you, sweet flower.
17th Feb 2020 4:47am
Wonderful to read you again, crow! You seem to be back in your full glory too. Yay! Everyone knows, or should know, I'm a moon girl with erotic writes. So I especially loved how you tied this together....
The moon seems just out of reach
She decides to try her luck
Opens his pants, begins to suck
"He is rigid as a gun
And she mouths him with the rising sun"
Got me wondering about that ammo tho!;)
The moon seems just out of reach
She decides to try her luck
Opens his pants, begins to suck
"He is rigid as a gun
And she mouths him with the rising sun"
Got me wondering about that ammo tho!;)
