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Stress
the pressures mount
one upon another
bleeping sounds
that interrupt each other
endless challenges, burdens
some old, many new
the pressures always mounting
a crooked pile ready to topple
one upon another
bleeping sounds
that interrupt each other
endless challenges, burdens
some old, many new
the pressures always mounting
a crooked pile ready to topple
Published 12th Feb 2020
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13th Feb 2020 1:43am
13th Feb 2020 9:26pm
Stress...the one constant in this world. Well said Lozzamus.
regards,
buddhakitty.
regards,
buddhakitty.
13th Feb 2020 9:26pm
14th Feb 2020 1:27am
14th Feb 2020 8:37pm
14th Feb 2020 6:30am
A great poem on stress and pressures that we all can relate to. You expressed it superbly in brevity and rhyming wow. Kudos.
Pls Pleez do comment my newest poem too, as interaction via comments is cool I feel and thoughts are best written.
Pls Pleez do comment my newest poem too, as interaction via comments is cool I feel and thoughts are best written.
14th Feb 2020 8:37pm
Thanks, Zaynab. Your command of language is far greater than mine, as I've gleaned from a reading of your latest poem.
14th Feb 2020 10:04pm
Oh Noh that can't be. You are English. For me it's a second language. You are being modest. Thanks!!
17th Feb 2020 1:21pm
17th Feb 2020 11:08pm
