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Betrayal
my Secret exposed
me to my heart; to Break it
Seeing both inside.
me to my heart; to Break it
Seeing both inside.
Published 12th Feb 2020
Author's Note
Fear and freedom...like oil and water... more like yin and yang... you decide!!
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12th Feb 2020 4:32pm
12th Feb 2020 4:35pm
Greetings,
Thanks for taking the time to enter my world... I totally agree with crisp... which can make one feel comforted and abandoned!!! Again thanks!
Thanks for taking the time to enter my world... I totally agree with crisp... which can make one feel comforted and abandoned!!! Again thanks!
13th Feb 2020 1:55am
Beautifully written! love the depth and the conciseness of this piece excellent work!🙌👏
Greetings,
Thanks for reading my piece. I am glad its intentions greeted you warmly!!
Thanks for reading my piece. I am glad its intentions greeted you warmly!!
14th Feb 2020 6:05pm
Dear L,
This poem is tight and for me, a bit scary. Betrayal is such a difficult experience. I admire your author’s notes and letting the reader decide how they want to view the reveal of one’s heart. There are many layers and voices not said behind this piece and I rather like that. Well done and well formatted.
H 🌷
This poem is tight and for me, a bit scary. Betrayal is such a difficult experience. I admire your author’s notes and letting the reader decide how they want to view the reveal of one’s heart. There are many layers and voices not said behind this piece and I rather like that. Well done and well formatted.
H 🌷
14th Feb 2020 11:21pm
Greetings,
Thanks for taking the time to explore my world... you are so right... there are many muted voices... again thanks!!
Thanks for taking the time to explore my world... you are so right... there are many muted voices... again thanks!!
