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something's broken
something's broken; the doctor can not fix; something's broken; like tocs, without the tics;
something's broken; one stares off into space; something's broken; a thing that's hard to trace;
something's broken; there's something off in here; something's broken, like bikes with rusty gears;
something's broken; a struggle to express; something's broken; an often lack of rest;
something's broken; each time one walks outside; something's broken; one feels one's mind is high;
something's broken; one's reached out many times; something's broken; to feel more out of mind....
something's broken....
Published 2nd Feb 2020
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2nd Feb 2020 1:56am
2nd Feb 2020 5:01pm
A broken heart can alter the way we function, and the pain that lingers between the psyche and the heart, can oft be overwhelming.
It’s never too late to locate the root cause, and start working on the underlying issues to ensure one can rise above.
You’ve described an element of the human condition rather aptly... kudos ! 🌻
It’s never too late to locate the root cause, and start working on the underlying issues to ensure one can rise above.
You’ve described an element of the human condition rather aptly... kudos ! 🌻
hello, shadow_starzzz. I appreciate your feedback, encouragement and time as always. thnx. I agree with your statement. this particular write is geared more towards matters of the mind.... it's really not about a broken heart. the root of it all; i suppose since childhood..i believe it goes beyond the symptoms of A.D.D. on top of that; poor social interaction, little to no social involvement, nor committed interest throughout upbringing....what they call depersonalization /derealization(like a serious case of it) seems to describe the feeling....i guess as far as the heart goes; things like lack of trust along with a hint of "paranoia" due to uncomfortable social situations could be added to all of this....but this is more about the mental state.
29th May 2020 5:10am
29th May 2020 10:08am
