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Subtlety
it's the eyes that draw me in
subtlety seductive
with a hint of fear
but freshly lit and duty free
there's no denying
a night time dream of deference
where drips of desire
tumble down
her dainty cheek
no torture, no suppression,
no midnight depression
as those nails start digging in
we cross
then re-cross
in a nearly perfect ring
toro
Pamplona fills the bill
she winks,
it's adoration
a soul she's climbing in
no spilling of tight held secrets
tonight no bull is going to win
subtlety seductive
with a hint of fear
but freshly lit and duty free
there's no denying
a night time dream of deference
where drips of desire
tumble down
her dainty cheek
no torture, no suppression,
no midnight depression
as those nails start digging in
we cross
then re-cross
in a nearly perfect ring
toro
Pamplona fills the bill
she winks,
it's adoration
a soul she's climbing in
no spilling of tight held secrets
tonight no bull is going to win
Published 27th Jan 2020
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27th Jan 2020 9:02pm
Subtle but seductive. "Tonight no bull is going to win," and no brutality exercised. Tender is the night, the nails digging in notwithstanding. Well done!
27th Jan 2020 10:05pm
28th Jan 2020 10:15am
A precious breakdown of what dreams are made of, the kind of dreams that remain etched upon the heart & mind.
A gorgeous write...🖤
A gorgeous write...🖤
28th Jan 2020 12:11pm
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