Commenting Preference:
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Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 3:41pm
Although the predator can be enticing, I sense that the lack of collaboration can come with a cost. My interpretation might be way off, but I sensed a distaste for the behaviour.
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Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 3:47pm
Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 4:17pm
Although not experienced in such dynamics, I would assume that it should never always be one-sided.
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Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 6:22pm
Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 8:31pm
That fine corruption
would involve interactive
participation
if allowed to play
evocative harmonies
of shared designing
would involve interactive
participation
if allowed to play
evocative harmonies
of shared designing
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Re: Re. Hunted
T' would, very much so,
but sometimes you cannot know,
until it's too late
but sometimes you cannot know,
until it's too late
Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 3:46pm
I like how you spilled the fabric of betrayal of being trap into a relationship were one becomes the hunted in the maze of lust...respect dear poetess
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Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 3:55pm
A maze of your lust
sounds rather fun - so lead me
to my fate, master
Giggles
sounds rather fun - so lead me
to my fate, master
Giggles
Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 4:06pm
Alright now be careful what you ask for dear poetess wink with a sweet sensation of a skillful tongue...😁
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Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 6:24pm
Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 6:38pm
Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 4:00pm
Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 4:06pm
Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 6:28pm
Hunted but not captured. The night denied him, a deep frustration. I take it you prevail. Well done!
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Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 10:17pm
Re. Hunted
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26th Jan 2020 8:50pm
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Re: Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 10:19pm
Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 10:14pm
Oh yes ... waiting in chains ... knowing what's coming ... who's coming ... delicious poeting my dear ...
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Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 10:23pm
Re. Hunted
26th Jan 2020 11:28pm
Re: Re. Hunted
27th Jan 2020 3:59pm
that is sweet of you
to say, she smiled, turning from
your pinned specimens
to say, she smiled, turning from
your pinned specimens
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28th Jan 2020 00:59am
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Re: Re. Hunted
28th Jan 2020 1:59pm
I try not to: the only 'cereal' killers I need are empty bowls after breakfast
Re. Hunted
13th Mar 2020 8:27pm
His unrequited lust leads his hunt while yours is to be the quarry of his desire. Viscerally powerful read my darling.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. Hunted
29th Mar 2020 10:20am