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Like the way the length of the highlit lines mirror the contours of the sensuous female silhouette like an all over lacy gown.
24th Jan 2020 11:21pm
I need to work here -
the form is not quite correct:
correction's important
the form is not quite correct:
correction's important
25th Jan 2020 4:37am
Agree with Solomon. The supporting image works nicely with the text. I will add that the usage of fucktard was jarring, but in a way that actually gave greater depth to the train of thought in that sequence.
25th Jan 2020 11:00am
it should maybe be "takes" not "breaks" a fucktard - the jarring was deliberate as you will realise sir. Smiles
25th Jan 2020 2:10pm
30th Mar 2020 3:31pm
25th Jan 2020 5:17am
25th Jan 2020 11:12am
It's sweet of you to say
That you so enjoyed the play
Of my funny little verses
And my life's sweet reverses
That you so enjoyed the play
Of my funny little verses
And my life's sweet reverses
13th Mar 2020 8:22pm
Milady this is visual art embodied in poetry. And I must say you do it like none other. Truly a work of art to fill the mind with all sorts of naughty dreams. And emotionally charged visions at that.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
30th Mar 2020 3:32pm
