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Summers Sun
She was pheromone
aware
wrapped up in the lips
pursed and pressed
awaiting
true response
where was he at
lost in seams
dangling
on a flesh'd bit
he was unaware
smothered
by no other sound
than complete
white alabaster shrines
gleam
in the sun
the southern warm glow
wind up railings
wait as defensive giant
another eye to misted windows...
broke they know
eye to intent eye
the lock of the front door
bit of hair betwixt finger
warmth
time
will start again
aware
wrapped up in the lips
pursed and pressed
awaiting
true response
where was he at
lost in seams
dangling
on a flesh'd bit
he was unaware
smothered
by no other sound
than complete
white alabaster shrines
gleam
in the sun
the southern warm glow
wind up railings
wait as defensive giant
another eye to misted windows...
broke they know
eye to intent eye
the lock of the front door
bit of hair betwixt finger
warmth
time
will start again
Published 25th Jan 2020
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Anonymous
25th Jan 2020 8:58pm
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26th Jan 2020 11:31am
That to me is Delicious immersion (is it not?)
Indeed the heat and warmth that is Attraction and power...
Greatly Appreciate the visit and RL Sky!!!
Indeed the heat and warmth that is Attraction and power...
Greatly Appreciate the visit and RL Sky!!!
26th Jan 2020 6:45pm
"Another eye to misted windows." My favorite line, but it's a tough call. Wonderful work.
26th Jan 2020 7:22pm
Thank You Sir Crow, Great to have You around again!!!
Water and mists how easily they visit
Water and mists how easily they visit
26th Jan 2020 10:44pm
Incredible writing. I find myself at a loss for words. The opening is grabbing and stunning, with it's zen quality of silent awareness. The details have a palpable intimacy, drawing us into your world. The way it is rendered is absolutely original. Beautiful work brother. This is what I read for, true and unabashed heart and spirit. 💖
27th Jan 2020 8:08am
Appreciate You Daniel and tickled to see You wander by-Good man!!!
But You just gotta step back a little more and let it come into focus
It's a piece of shite ...up close its hard to discern detail :)
Thank You for Your time and care Good Man!!!!
But You just gotta step back a little more and let it come into focus
It's a piece of shite ...up close its hard to discern detail :)
Thank You for Your time and care Good Man!!!!
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
22nd Feb 2020 11:08am
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22nd Feb 2020 11:20am
...And again I thank You
When I can...I get wrapped up in whittling...sometimes knocking out too much...I DO like sparse and minimalist ...capturing it lol I can't ever hit exactly where I want it to be (I am my own worst enemy)
Thank You Didi
When I can...I get wrapped up in whittling...sometimes knocking out too much...I DO like sparse and minimalist ...capturing it lol I can't ever hit exactly where I want it to be (I am my own worst enemy)
Thank You Didi
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
22nd Feb 2020 11:23am
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