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Bait in our Pond
ain't droppin'
anchor. . .
way too chummy
anchor. . .
way too chummy
Written by
Tallen
(earth_empath)
Published 24th Jan 2020
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Re. Bait in our Pond
24th Jan 2020 9:12pm
Re: Re. Bait in our Pond
25th Jan 2020 00:02am
i could give the tribute to 2 from yesterday
but for the sake of
getting along
i will refrain.
but for the sake of
getting along
i will refrain.
Re. Bait in our Pond
Anonymous
25th Jan 2020 12:23pm
I can't decide which entry is better ...!
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Re: Re. Bait in our Pond
25th Jan 2020 7:30pm
Re. Bait in our Pond
Very punny old chum! You are certainly a very talented writer, excellent submisson! P.s. I hope this finds you well, I have been thinking about you and wondering how you have been lately. I know that I don't know you and I don't have an explanation as to why you are in my thoughts as of late, but there you are. I do so hope you're happy and healthy and in your right place in the world. Peace be upon you and your loved ones. Blessed be!
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Re: Re. Bait in our Pond
4th Feb 2020 2:37pm
thank You for the kind comments
Delighted You saw the pun (metaphor) here
i've been OK -- up and down emotionally -- comes with the schizophrenia, i suppose.
Perhaps You see me on FB posting daily?
Or because we are kindred Frequencies?
No loved ones living with me and my Sister believe sometime this year our Mom will pass. They live (and my Brother-in-Law) live about 10 minutes driving time from me and i try to visit my Mom twice a month.
Anyways, i wish You and Yours a prosperous year filled with a plethera of Blessings & Happy moments.
Blessed be.
Delighted You saw the pun (metaphor) here
i've been OK -- up and down emotionally -- comes with the schizophrenia, i suppose.
Perhaps You see me on FB posting daily?
Or because we are kindred Frequencies?
No loved ones living with me and my Sister believe sometime this year our Mom will pass. They live (and my Brother-in-Law) live about 10 minutes driving time from me and i try to visit my Mom twice a month.
Anyways, i wish You and Yours a prosperous year filled with a plethera of Blessings & Happy moments.
Blessed be.
Re. Bait in our Pond
20th Feb 2020 4:18pm
Great job with this ... wonderful minimalism ... tells a story so crisply ...
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Re: Re. Bait in our Pond
20th Feb 2020 5:25pm
Hope this caused You to laugh, as well
i thought quite applicable to real life
appreciate Your kind comments
i thought quite applicable to real life
appreciate Your kind comments
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
5th Mar 2020 2:41am
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Re: Re. Bait in our Pond
5th Mar 2020 6:09pm
this is a metaphor
but not the one You see
but i can SEE
how You can see it this way
: )
but not the one You see
but i can SEE
how You can see it this way
: )