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Five Outer Space HaaKoo for the Next Whirl'd
I
Cruel world, how would you
do, simulating the Star-lit death
of maiden's first bloom.
II
Moon starts above, from
time's previous aperture,
disregarding " me"
III
They live in other
constellations, watching our
garbage spin with glee.
IV
Can our techies knock
out that "rogue" meteor be
fore it blows our "Minds"?
V
H.G. Wells' rocket
ship took me to the Moon, hun-
dred years ago.
and so...........?
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2020dkzkdankoakpoom+badpxtr2020january
Cruel world, how would you
do, simulating the Star-lit death
of maiden's first bloom.
II
Moon starts above, from
time's previous aperture,
disregarding " me"
III
They live in other
constellations, watching our
garbage spin with glee.
IV
Can our techies knock
out that "rogue" meteor be
fore it blows our "Minds"?
V
H.G. Wells' rocket
ship took me to the Moon, hun-
dred years ago.
and so...........?
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzxxxxxxxxxxxxx
2020dkzkdankoakpoom+badpxtr2020january
Published 21st Jan 2020
Author's Note
"To the Moon, Alice!".....Ralph Cramden, "The Honeymooners"
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21st Jan 2020 7:37pm
Sigh. I really enjoy your introspective and observational nature, Danny. H. G. Wells - what will it be? War of the Worlds or a meteor as our fate? Stay tuned, maybe. . .
Yeah, gotta get some HGW. Read 2 in JHS ("War of the worlds" and "Off On A Comet" about a comet colliding with our and takin a piece of (with some of "us" on board. It took forever to figger what the title meant. But my book report got an A+ !. Gotta read it again, Since music has been erased from "my life", been reading up a shit-storm. (Really not that much). The fact that i have scant retention of what I'm readig is another matter.
Oh, oh...ERROR: OOAC was writ by Jules Verne, not Wells.
Oh, oh...ERROR: OOAC was writ by Jules Verne, not Wells.
21st Jan 2020 11:54pm
21st Jan 2020 11:51pm
see you at "the restaurant at the end
of the universe" perhaps
I won't, of course, if you've got other plans
for armageddon ..
of the universe" perhaps
I won't, of course, if you've got other plans
for armageddon ..
22nd Jan 2020 00:26am
yes,
Armageddon Omelets will be all the rage
(& fchrissakes, don't put all yr eggs in one fckn basket !!!!!!!!)
Armageddon Omelets will be all the rage
(& fchrissakes, don't put all yr eggs in one fckn basket !!!!!!!!)
