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Cat Naps
Sometimes when he sees me lying there,
He pounces on to the bed!
Climbing up to my chest,
Nuzzling at my nose,
Purring up a storm;
His sweet little whiskers tickle my cheeks,
And I scratch his furry neck.
He purrs delightfully,
Drool drips down his chin;
His eyes, glazed, in a euphoric daze,
He’s entered a kitty trance again!
Kneading my shirt into oblivion,
With his precious little paws,
And his razor-sharp claws,
Isn’t he the cutest thing you ever saw?
He knows it’s time to take a nap,
So he lies down on my chest,
Slowly blinking,
Softly purring,
As he settles down to rest.
Like a fuzzy, heated blanket for me,
With purrs that soothe my soul.
I am quite relaxed as well, you see,
I think I might take nap mysel…
...zzzzzzzzzzzz
He pounces on to the bed!
Climbing up to my chest,
Nuzzling at my nose,
Purring up a storm;
His sweet little whiskers tickle my cheeks,
And I scratch his furry neck.
He purrs delightfully,
Drool drips down his chin;
His eyes, glazed, in a euphoric daze,
He’s entered a kitty trance again!
Kneading my shirt into oblivion,
With his precious little paws,
And his razor-sharp claws,
Isn’t he the cutest thing you ever saw?
He knows it’s time to take a nap,
So he lies down on my chest,
Slowly blinking,
Softly purring,
As he settles down to rest.
Like a fuzzy, heated blanket for me,
With purrs that soothe my soul.
I am quite relaxed as well, you see,
I think I might take nap mysel…
...zzzzzzzzzzzz
Author's Note
A playful little poem, inspired by my cat, Snowball, who is ironically a black cat! This one's a little silly, I know, but I love the little booger, so he deserves a poem ❤️
It's surprising to me how some people think other animals are incapable of love. We share more with them than most people realize... they experience a plethora of emotions just like we do, although they are less complex. Just because their love is less complex than ours doesn't mean it is any less real!
It's surprising to me how some people think other animals are incapable of love. We share more with them than most people realize... they experience a plethora of emotions just like we do, although they are less complex. Just because their love is less complex than ours doesn't mean it is any less real!
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17th Jan 2020 8:24am
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17th Jan 2020 8:50am
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17th Jan 2020 8:29am
LMAO I just found a pet name for one of my old long lost friends. Thank you!!!
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17th Jan 2020 8:36am
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17th Jan 2020 8:52am
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17th Jan 2020 8:36am
I'm a cat person myself. My cat lives up to her name "princess". Nice playful poem.
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17th Jan 2020 8:58am
I'm a cat person, but also a bird person... Go figure, lol.
My favorite animal = birds
Their #1 killer = cats
Hmmm...
My favorite animal = birds
Their #1 killer = cats
Hmmm...
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17th Jan 2020 9:14am
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17th Jan 2020 9:56am
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17th Jan 2020 9:00am
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17th Jan 2020 10:30am
Aww. Now Snowball is getting famous on DUP and will live forever in your wonderful whimsical poem. It felt like I was there and I could see the scene played out before my own eyes. Exceptional work, my friend! Bravo!
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17th Jan 2020 2:25pm
You are right, faith, lol. He's currently celebrating his new, exciting life of fame by taking a nap! I'm glad you liked it. It never fails, if he sees me laying in the bed on my back, he's got to come jump on top of me to get pampered :P
Thanks for stopping by, and for your RL and comment ❤️
Thanks for stopping by, and for your RL and comment ❤️
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17th Jan 2020 6:43pm
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18th Jan 2020 2:29am
That's my little buddy ❤️
I'm glad you liked this one - it was a fun one for me to write!
Sometimes it's nice to break from being so meticulous with your poetry...
This, for example, took me a total of about 5 minutes, lol. I didn't overanalyze - it came out, and I just posted it!
I'm glad you liked this one - it was a fun one for me to write!
Sometimes it's nice to break from being so meticulous with your poetry...
This, for example, took me a total of about 5 minutes, lol. I didn't overanalyze - it came out, and I just posted it!
Re. Cat Naps
17th Jan 2020 12:32pm
Kitties snuggles are the best! What a sweet little tribute to your furry friend!
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18th Jan 2020 2:30am
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17th Jan 2020 1:32pm
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18th Jan 2020 2:38am
Lol. How aptly played, heh :)
Thanks for your continued readership, Buddha!
Thanks for your continued readership, Buddha!
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17th Jan 2020 1:44pm
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18th Jan 2020 2:51am
Haha! I don't know about that, but thank you, Stoney. I kind of just threw this one together, heh :)
I appreciate you stopping by again to read - and also for RLing this!
I appreciate you stopping by again to read - and also for RLing this!
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18th Jan 2020 2:14pm
it just reminds me when i had a cat name bay bay he use to do those things to me, it was heart felt of memories to remind me that there is still some beauty of love, in the world between humans and there pets of joy and laughter...respect
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17th Jan 2020 2:53pm
Healing Frequencies that purring gig!!
i'm certain that the Cat that adopted me long ago taught me HOW TO nap -- lol
(would You mind if i shared this on Facebook? My Step-Daughter is grooming herself to be a "Crazy Cat Lady" & would appreciate this spill)
i'm certain that the Cat that adopted me long ago taught me HOW TO nap -- lol
(would You mind if i shared this on Facebook? My Step-Daughter is grooming herself to be a "Crazy Cat Lady" & would appreciate this spill)
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18th Jan 2020 3:26am
There is a primal comfort that is invoked with this calming sound of contentment :)
Thanks for stopping by, Tallen - I am glad that you liked this :)
You are welcome to share any of my poems, anywhere - as long as you aren't claiming them as your own!
Thanks for stopping by, Tallen - I am glad that you liked this :)
You are welcome to share any of my poems, anywhere - as long as you aren't claiming them as your own!
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18th Jan 2020 9:24am
Thank You
Of course i'd credit You
no way i could copy You or anyone's ink
i have a hard enough time trying to understand
a lot of the ink here to begin with
Of course i'd credit You
no way i could copy You or anyone's ink
i have a hard enough time trying to understand
a lot of the ink here to begin with
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17th Jan 2020 5:47pm
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18th Jan 2020 4:11am
Heh, I thought about naming mine something to reflect his color, but I figured a little irony and humor would be better, as well as more fitting to his and my personalities, so I went with Snowball... heh :)
Thanks for sharing that, slip!
Thanks for sharing that, slip!
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Great poem! Lucky for you, your cat sounds great, minus the drooling. The cat my wife and I have now is somewhere near 13-16 pounds. So sitting on the lap is okay, but not while in bed. She's like a calico version of Garfield.
I should clarify. My cat is like Garfield.
I should clarify. My cat is like Garfield.
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18th Jan 2020 4:18am
Thanks so much, russel! I'm so glad that you liked it :)
He didn't actually always drool like that. When he was younger, he was hit by a car and injured his jaw, and after he recovered, he just kind of does that. The poor thing has an upper bite that makes him look like a vampire lol. He's about 12 pounds, and is such a sweet cat... on the brink of being too large and heavy, but not quite.
Thanks for sharing that, heh
He didn't actually always drool like that. When he was younger, he was hit by a car and injured his jaw, and after he recovered, he just kind of does that. The poor thing has an upper bite that makes him look like a vampire lol. He's about 12 pounds, and is such a sweet cat... on the brink of being too large and heavy, but not quite.
Thanks for sharing that, heh
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17th Jan 2020 7:11pm
Nice poem. I used to have a dog so I remember spending time with him. Had him for 15 years since I was 5 so it makes me miss him a bit. It's nice to have connection with something or someone. Overall you showed love for the cat which I felt was sweet and shows a lot of character. Good job
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18th Jan 2020 10:41am
Thanks Cosiest, your kind words mean a lot. Thanks for sharing that about your dog.
I believe the way a person treats animals is a direct reflection of character, and speaks for the person's empathetic capacity. In other words, if you can't be nice to a cat or a dog, you probably aren't going to be so nice to a human either. It upsets me that some people see animals as inferior to humans, and use this as a means to justify their mistreatment. I believe they should be treated with love, kindness, and respect just as any human should.
I believe the way a person treats animals is a direct reflection of character, and speaks for the person's empathetic capacity. In other words, if you can't be nice to a cat or a dog, you probably aren't going to be so nice to a human either. It upsets me that some people see animals as inferior to humans, and use this as a means to justify their mistreatment. I believe they should be treated with love, kindness, and respect just as any human should.
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17th Jan 2020 11:28pm
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18th Jan 2020 10:45am
Thanks for stopping by, Joy!
Perhaps Snowball is your cat's long lost brother ;)
Perhaps Snowball is your cat's long lost brother ;)
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18th Jan 2020 10:58am
At the rate they multiply, I'm sure he's got relatives all over the place, heh :)
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18th Jan 2020 00:10am
Oh nice one newB.
Not a fan of cats but a lovely poem it is.
Indeed.....
Not a fan of cats but a lovely poem it is.
Indeed.....
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18th Jan 2020 11:05am
Awww, that is sad to hear. I'm really glad that you liked the poem though. Why the prejudice? A cat must have rubbed you the wrong way lol
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Well. No im just a dog lover.
I guess im influenced by a movie i saw when little (dont even remember the name)
Where the cat sucked the life/ breath of the people. 😂😂
And even tho ive been told i got like cat eyes..... But noo dog it is. 🐶😉
I guess im influenced by a movie i saw when little (dont even remember the name)
Where the cat sucked the life/ breath of the people. 😂😂
And even tho ive been told i got like cat eyes..... But noo dog it is. 🐶😉
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18th Jan 2020 3:44pm
Heh, that movie wasn't Stephen King's, "Cat's Eye" was it? If so, that scared me as a child as well! I used to be more of a dog person too... until I fostered a kitten myself :P
One of the biggest attractions are that cats self-clean! I don't think I've ever smelled a bad smell on my cat - with all of that meticulous grooming, they keep themselves pretty pristine... whereas, a dog might just roll in it... lol!
One of the biggest attractions are that cats self-clean! I don't think I've ever smelled a bad smell on my cat - with all of that meticulous grooming, they keep themselves pretty pristine... whereas, a dog might just roll in it... lol!
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18th Jan 2020 4:08pm
😂🐶
Ironically . ...
In japenese anime,
My fav character morphs into a black cat. Identical as yours....☺️
Anime:bleach
Yoruichi
Ironically . ...
In japenese anime,
My fav character morphs into a black cat. Identical as yours....☺️
Anime:bleach
Yoruichi
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Aw! 💖 I'm kitty people too. This is such a lovely oasis amongst the heavy subjects we often come across in our reading, rendered with palpable tenderness and a great flow of descriptors, painting your pal on the page.
Little over a year ago, this stray wandered up to my back porch, skin and bones. Named him Dorian for the hurricane that didn't annihilate us. He's healthy now. He still lives outside, but climbs through an overhead vent into my shed, so I put a cat bed out there for him. He wakes me up every morning around 6, jumping from the back step banister onto the roof. Likes the bird's eye view, I guess. He got a cyst on his face last week and I took him to the vet. So well behaved, you'd think he was a domestic. One MAAAOOOWW of protest on the way there. 😅
They're really wonderful, our pets. Many wisdom traditions agree that much evil flows from the mouth. I vent often in my writing. There is something so Zen and disarming about their gentle eyes and no talking. Haha.
Thank you for sharing something like this with us NB. May you and your lil friend be blessed. Namaste.
Little over a year ago, this stray wandered up to my back porch, skin and bones. Named him Dorian for the hurricane that didn't annihilate us. He's healthy now. He still lives outside, but climbs through an overhead vent into my shed, so I put a cat bed out there for him. He wakes me up every morning around 6, jumping from the back step banister onto the roof. Likes the bird's eye view, I guess. He got a cyst on his face last week and I took him to the vet. So well behaved, you'd think he was a domestic. One MAAAOOOWW of protest on the way there. 😅
They're really wonderful, our pets. Many wisdom traditions agree that much evil flows from the mouth. I vent often in my writing. There is something so Zen and disarming about their gentle eyes and no talking. Haha.
Thank you for sharing something like this with us NB. May you and your lil friend be blessed. Namaste.
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18th Jan 2020 7:03pm
Aww, thanks for your sweet and thoughtful comment! It means a lot! As it is a lovely oasis for you, it is also a lovely oasis for me as well. It’s nice to take a break from the more serious matter from time to time to have a little fun… I think we all need that every now and again, lest we be very bitter individuals!
I loved your story about Dorian! Thank you for sharing that… how nice of you to nurture him back to health. You are a beautiful soul 💖
Also, I completely agree with what you said about the serenity of silence, and expression of emotion without words... sometimes things are meant to be FELT rather than discussed. That is truly a special gift to us.
Thank you, Daniel, for stopping by again, and for the kind blessing,
Best wishes,
-NewB
I loved your story about Dorian! Thank you for sharing that… how nice of you to nurture him back to health. You are a beautiful soul 💖
Also, I completely agree with what you said about the serenity of silence, and expression of emotion without words... sometimes things are meant to be FELT rather than discussed. That is truly a special gift to us.
Thank you, Daniel, for stopping by again, and for the kind blessing,
Best wishes,
-NewB
Re. Cat Naps
18th Jan 2020 3:54am
Wonderful. You had me at sweet little whiskers. This is why the internet is full of pictures of cats :)
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18th Jan 2020 4:09am
Thanks so much for your kind comment, Ben! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it...It's very nice of you to stop by :)
I believe you are new to my poetry...If you get a chance, you should also check out some of my more serious poems. Perhaps you will like some of them as well!
I believe you are new to my poetry...If you get a chance, you should also check out some of my more serious poems. Perhaps you will like some of them as well!
Re. Cat Naps
18th Jan 2020 10:13pm
This is lovely. We have a beautiful black cat that brings us immense joy.
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19th Jan 2020 1:04pm
Thanks so much for stopping by, David!
I had a feeling that you might enjoy this, judging by your profile picture that is. Your cat is very majestic :)
I had a feeling that you might enjoy this, judging by your profile picture that is. Your cat is very majestic :)
Re. Cat Naps
20th Jan 2020 1:38am
I adore this poem. Cats are affectionate creatures whose love brings warmth to the house they reside in. Silly poems are my favorites. And this one certainly rises above mere play into food for the soul.
John
John
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Re. Cat Naps
20th Jan 2020 4:29am
sweet poem, I think animals love more purely than a lot of people can, no politics involved, they just get right down to the business of affection and can heal a wounded heart. I am always softer under their influence:)
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20th Jan 2020 5:40pm
Awww so tender and sweet and black cats are so CUTE! ❤
I had a bad nightmare on a black cat and it was terrifying though lol
If you want to read my story about it, i posted it here its called yellow eyes 🤗
Good job hun thanks for sharing 😊
I had a bad nightmare on a black cat and it was terrifying though lol
If you want to read my story about it, i posted it here its called yellow eyes 🤗
Good job hun thanks for sharing 😊
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21st Jan 2020 3:22pm
I should probably get a cat now! Nice poem about your cat. I don't really like cats, because they have caws that can do more harm than a new sharpened knife. I don't like dogs either, got attacked by one of my brother's dog and he still claims that it was playing with me. The dog name was hulk and he had more muscles than fur. I wouldn't keep a bird as a pet, either I will not feed it right or I feed myself from it. So basically I just loved your poem and your cat really looks cool, as long as he stays in the poem. And as long as he stays overseas.
Lovely write NB
Lovely write NB
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20th Apr 2020 8:29am
This is so sweet NewB. Cats are sweet and playful pets. My son loves cats and he let them sleep on his chest. 🌺😻
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