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the love i languished for
Published 13th Jan 2020
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2020 2:37am
Hey Cab.......outstanding ink.......sensual and soothing to the soul........amazing how a few words can touch your heart.......enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Jan 2020 3:48am
Thank you, flower!
Your blooms are always warm and positive.
Something I did not do deliberately has happened with this competition poem, in which the rule limits the word count to 50. After posting the piece, I relised that each stanza had a uniform word count per line that added to exactly 50 (as 6+6+6+7 per stanza).
Yours sincerely
cab
Your blooms are always warm and positive.
Something I did not do deliberately has happened with this competition poem, in which the rule limits the word count to 50. After posting the piece, I relised that each stanza had a uniform word count per line that added to exactly 50 (as 6+6+6+7 per stanza).
Yours sincerely
cab
15th Jan 2020 3:41am
Thank you very much, NewB. I really appreciate your encouragement.
Some things about the poem happened without much help from me. Let me copy/paste what I've said to flowergirl:
"After posting the piece, I relised that each stanza had a uniform word count per line that added to exactly 50 (as 6+6+6+7 per stanza)."
I think the Lord exploits my pen for a purpose!
Thanks for the RL add.
Sincerely
cab
Some things about the poem happened without much help from me. Let me copy/paste what I've said to flowergirl:
"After posting the piece, I relised that each stanza had a uniform word count per line that added to exactly 50 (as 6+6+6+7 per stanza)."
I think the Lord exploits my pen for a purpose!
Thanks for the RL add.
Sincerely
cab
