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A Town by Any Other Name

Isolation stalks the remote red dirt,    
As tension rises like the tide.  
Loneliness floods the sad back streets,    
Blazing heat, bare feet, force the kids inside.    
    
Drinking becomes a stubborn escape,    
From the heat, a hopeless storm.    
Drugs, Police and a hard edged life,    
Leaves no hope, for the desperate and torn.    
   
Crime accepted as a part of life,    
Creeps in like a humid marsh wind.    
Police watch the A/C on a thin blue line,    
Forcing a blind eye to many small sins.    
 
 
 
7/01/20
“© Australian
Copyright Council 2019”
Written by JOY (Joybell)
Published | Edited 13th Jan 2020
Author's Note
This poem is a result of a game my partner and I played. Each had to choose 20 words describing our town, giving us a total of 40 words, all had to be used with a few extras. We also had a time limit of 10 minutes.
This is the result of his work, feedback would be appreciated.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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