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I Quit
you smoking devil
with your red fiery stare
lighting up each time
my lips are on you
extinguishing the fire
that burns inside of me
"I'm letting you go." I whisper, staring right back into your inferno.
Just once more...
"I'm done. This is it."
Just one more kiss...
"You've been good company..."
One. More. Breath.
"Goodbye. I quit."
with your red fiery stare
lighting up each time
my lips are on you
extinguishing the fire
that burns inside of me
"I'm letting you go." I whisper, staring right back into your inferno.
Just once more...
"I'm done. This is it."
Just one more kiss...
"You've been good company..."
One. More. Breath.
"Goodbye. I quit."
Published 5th Jan 2020
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5th Jan 2020 9:18pm
Dear D,
Please let me know if this works. Every time I say I’m done something sends me down a path where hurting myself with these damn things is the only thing that makes me feel in control. As though I’ve got something over the issue that drove me here in the first place. Oh well, fingers crossed this year is the year I say I’m done too. I’m so happy to see you today! Lovely write as usual xx H❤️
Please let me know if this works. Every time I say I’m done something sends me down a path where hurting myself with these damn things is the only thing that makes me feel in control. As though I’ve got something over the issue that drove me here in the first place. Oh well, fingers crossed this year is the year I say I’m done too. I’m so happy to see you today! Lovely write as usual xx H❤️
6th Jan 2020 3:04pm
Dear H,
So far so good. It has been 2 whole days, just a tiny little drop in the ocean. I suppose for me personally it really helps that I don't feel like I need them anymore, they are not crutches and I can walk by myself without a blue cloud of smoke hanging over me.
I hope you find peace and happiness, whether that involves these devils or not. ;) Have a wonderful year regardless!
Delanee.
So far so good. It has been 2 whole days, just a tiny little drop in the ocean. I suppose for me personally it really helps that I don't feel like I need them anymore, they are not crutches and I can walk by myself without a blue cloud of smoke hanging over me.
I hope you find peace and happiness, whether that involves these devils or not. ;) Have a wonderful year regardless!
Delanee.
6th Jan 2020 3:03pm
Very real and from the heart... loved this! Best of luck staying quit :)
6th Jan 2020 3:05pm
6th Jan 2020 10:08pm
7th Jan 2020 6:21am
7th Jan 2020 9:05am
Try a Cough drop when you get a craving it worked for me.
It’s gotta be a nasty Eucalyptus menthol one though lol
It’s gotta be a nasty Eucalyptus menthol one though lol
