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SAILOR'S DREAM
You straddled me upon the bed,
a voluptuous figurehead,
breasts of a shape to invite suck
and even bite for bit of luck,
your head held high, tresses streaming
on back and shoulder - was I dreaming?
You made us rock like ship on sea,
cowgirling pride of the navy.
I'd put you front of any ship,
seabirds would gather to worship,
marveling at your firm jawline,
regular torso, breasts' align.
a voluptuous figurehead,
breasts of a shape to invite suck
and even bite for bit of luck,
your head held high, tresses streaming
on back and shoulder - was I dreaming?
You made us rock like ship on sea,
cowgirling pride of the navy.
I'd put you front of any ship,
seabirds would gather to worship,
marveling at your firm jawline,
regular torso, breasts' align.
Published 29th Dec 2019
Author's Note
Inspired by picture accompanying Musically Mr M's Re:Animation (Cumming Back), shown here. The poem grew out of my rhyming comments to his poem's.
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29th Dec 2019 8:49pm
While I typically don't care for the erotic genre, that fact that you built this poem out of comments to another's is fantastic! And I love the reference to her being on the front of a ship - which in ancient times meant baring her breasts would appease the sea, thus provide wind for the sales and quell storms for the journey.
30th Dec 2019 8:32am
30th Dec 2019 11:53am
Absolutely! That is why there were bare-chested women carved onto the front of ships!
Anonymous
29th Dec 2019 11:48pm
I think this may be one of your best!
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