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Winter sunset in my eyes
rays of golden hues rage on
pale-white and a black sky
we all need darkness to see the stars
rays of golden hues rage on
pale-white and a black sky
we all need darkness to see the stars
Published 28th Dec 2019
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29th Dec 2019 12:21pm
Dear D,
The last line of this piece is a real grabber! It’s really an amazing visual.
This work has me thinking and I am quite enamored with its many ways to think and apply its meaning. Well penned. H🌷
The last line of this piece is a real grabber! It’s really an amazing visual.
This work has me thinking and I am quite enamored with its many ways to think and apply its meaning. Well penned. H🌷
