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Scifi
In a Perfect World
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In a Perfect World
Written by
eswaller
Published
18th Dec 2019
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Visual Poetry #dystopian
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Entry for Visual Poetry #dystopian competition.
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#dystopian
#scifi
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Re. In a Perfect World
wallyroo92
20th Dec 2019 3:56pm
Nicely done. I think we all pray for that open door, to have some hope.
Good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. In a Perfect World
eswaller
20th Dec 2019 7:52pm
Thank you.
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