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All Hands
He had one hand on
the small of her back
and the other was in
her purse.
She'd gone
out for a change,
he'd gone out
for some change.
Published 13th Dec 2019
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13th Dec 2019 00:25am
13th Dec 2019 00:26am
13th Dec 2019 5:29am
masterly woven ..the verses... loved the brevity, the so moneyminded greys ppl thrive unto total decimations-you say it strikingly in such nuance & sequence. loving your pics & poetry nikkimoe..write on, thanks:)
13th Dec 2019 3:24pm
13th Dec 2019 9:42am
Mental illness abounds in many forms, as one must suspect here ... For one's priorities should be so corrupted towards money and away from a beautiful woman is insanity itself ... To my mind ... Epic write and photo ... Bless and love ... ..
13th Dec 2019 7:48pm
16th Dec 2019 00:57am
I like the be-bop beat b/c it keeps the twin streams intertwined. You always drop it succinct with this on-the-brink rhythm that's so distinctly fucking Scheherazade.
16th Dec 2019 1:21am
