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All Heart
The way to a man's heart
is not a knife thrust upward
between the fifth and sixth rib
and given a good jiggle about
it's not a sniper's dead shot
headshot armour piercing
it's not a shotgun blast with
both barrels at point-blank
It is not a carefully inserted
power drill on hammer setting
it's not a fire axe thrust powerfully
with force into the chest cavity
it's not a grenade hung round
the neck for self-detonation
it is not a kitchen carving serrated
knife thrust from behind skilled
to stab under the shoulder blade
it's not even the surgeons careless
slip of the scalpel during surgery
These very events will stop the heart
but let's face it - where is the fun in that?
the most skilled way to a man's heart
first, make him fall in love with you
take, take, and take some more with
or without permission, cheat, cheat
and cheat some more with a smile on your face
cheat with other men, women and horses
once he seems out of cash or worthless
make him feel desperate by questioning
the validity of his love, keep him on edge
use sex as a weapon to keep him hooked
if he starts to suspect, dump him and cut
of all contact, turn others against him
create lies assassinating his character
this is truly the way to a man's heart
if you want to destroy him just because
you can.
Killing him is too easy
break his heart and torture
him for years to come
such satisfaction can be had
for deliberate and hateful planners
all it takes to start it off
is to offer love
then you are
good
to
go
is not a knife thrust upward
between the fifth and sixth rib
and given a good jiggle about
it's not a sniper's dead shot
headshot armour piercing
it's not a shotgun blast with
both barrels at point-blank
It is not a carefully inserted
power drill on hammer setting
it's not a fire axe thrust powerfully
with force into the chest cavity
it's not a grenade hung round
the neck for self-detonation
it is not a kitchen carving serrated
knife thrust from behind skilled
to stab under the shoulder blade
it's not even the surgeons careless
slip of the scalpel during surgery
These very events will stop the heart
but let's face it - where is the fun in that?
the most skilled way to a man's heart
first, make him fall in love with you
take, take, and take some more with
or without permission, cheat, cheat
and cheat some more with a smile on your face
cheat with other men, women and horses
once he seems out of cash or worthless
make him feel desperate by questioning
the validity of his love, keep him on edge
use sex as a weapon to keep him hooked
if he starts to suspect, dump him and cut
of all contact, turn others against him
create lies assassinating his character
this is truly the way to a man's heart
if you want to destroy him just because
you can.
Killing him is too easy
break his heart and torture
him for years to come
such satisfaction can be had
for deliberate and hateful planners
all it takes to start it off
is to offer love
then you are
good
to
go
Published 9th Dec 2019
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Anonymous
9th Dec 2019 10:06pm
This poem mirrors my dark feelings of the day. It is well written, proves a small smile (despite the subject)....the irony and playing tone makes it bittersweet. I'm sure it could be read in a number of ways; hope my way doesn't offend.
9th Dec 2019 10:15pm
absolutely no offence was taken, I write and then publish. Readers can take anything from it or interpret it in any which way. The person read it that's good enough for me and that's why I say thank you so much for taking the time to read it :-))))))))))
9th Dec 2019 10:50pm
10th Dec 2019 8:07pm
I am not sure what you meant - but thanks for the read (lol)
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I had to edit out my previous comment because on review it was poorly expressed. I just wanted to express that I believe it's good to name the enemy that refuses to name itself.
20th Dec 2019 11:25pm
It is only in private that one can name the names but I agree if you have toxic people around you you should give them only the respect of their name. It is unfortunate they cannot be named in a public forum and they know that because writing and poetry is the most important thing to me and I would not risk my membership here - but when I am ready to leave all bets will be off - if that day ever comes.
there was nothing wrong with the opinion you expressed. Your response was an honest one and that is what I want.
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there was nothing wrong with the opinion you expressed. Your response was an honest one and that is what I want.
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10th Dec 2019 2:55am
10th Dec 2019 8:06pm
thank you so much for the read and your positive feedback
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10th Dec 2019 7:55pm
David, mo chara....my Gram always delighted, in telling me, the ole cliche' that "the way to a man"s heart is through his stomach!" And while i know. she meant thru food....(My Pop-Pop being especially fond of her culinary abilities...)i"m quite certain this could be an equally as painful route / method, as All those other "gruesome" ways you mentioned Hee! Hee!
However....once again, your signature, twisted sense of humor creates a bit more of light-hearted spin on a much more serious, painfully difficult situation! Deliberately playing games with someone"s feelings / emotional well-being, is cruel.....unacceptable--a l w a y s, and your unique use of sarcasm enhances this point! whether, or not, some readers may be a bit "offended" by your style, this piece leaves deep impact---one NOT easily forgotten!
HUMONGOUS Irish Hugggggsss to You!
However....once again, your signature, twisted sense of humor creates a bit more of light-hearted spin on a much more serious, painfully difficult situation! Deliberately playing games with someone"s feelings / emotional well-being, is cruel.....unacceptable--a l w a y s, and your unique use of sarcasm enhances this point! whether, or not, some readers may be a bit "offended" by your style, this piece leaves deep impact---one NOT easily forgotten!
HUMONGOUS Irish Hugggggsss to You!
10th Dec 2019 8:06pm
me sarcastic?? Moi???? say it ain't so! LOL
I love your comments you really do read these poems carefully and I am in your debt for that. I hope you were not offended although part of the plan was to offend some people and not others (LOL) I always like to rattle cages :-))))))))))))
((((((((((( Warm Huge Scottish Bear Hugs ))))))))))
I love your comments you really do read these poems carefully and I am in your debt for that. I hope you were not offended although part of the plan was to offend some people and not others (LOL) I always like to rattle cages :-))))))))))))
((((((((((( Warm Huge Scottish Bear Hugs ))))))))))
11th Dec 2019 1:08am
(Grins and Giggles! 0Big Scottish bears do tend to rattle cages!!!
My jaw may have become a bit unhinged...LOL! But....offended....NOT at all! ;) To me, this piece is intended to leave a lasting impression upon its readers! And--most assuredly--it does just that!
My jaw may have become a bit unhinged...LOL! But....offended....NOT at all! ;) To me, this piece is intended to leave a lasting impression upon its readers! And--most assuredly--it does just that!
18th Dec 2019 1:10am
Scottish bears give the best hugs ever, long gentle and warm. They do not crush, they do not scratch and they never bite (without permission)
However even a Scottish bear can be provoked if mistreated or injured - Like the most mellow of bears if they are poked to much they have the ability and the claws to tear humans apart, but only those deserving it.
Scottish bears can also be fierce, fiercely loyal, fiercely protective of friends and underdogs, fiercely preserving the truth,..................
#warmhugescottishbearhugs
However even a Scottish bear can be provoked if mistreated or injured - Like the most mellow of bears if they are poked to much they have the ability and the claws to tear humans apart, but only those deserving it.
Scottish bears can also be fierce, fiercely loyal, fiercely protective of friends and underdogs, fiercely preserving the truth,..................
#warmhugescottishbearhugs
20th Dec 2019 9:28pm
Awwwww.....then keep those big ole, warm Scottish bear hugs commin' my way....Please! ;)
20th Dec 2019 11:18pm
13th Dec 2019 4:25pm
Powerful write, I love the rapid fire pace as you build toward the central core of the write. I would love it if you would record this and send it to the podcast David.
18th Dec 2019 1:43am
Anonymous
10th Feb 2020 11:56pm
Sometimes we have no choice but to close the door and walk away. You can love someone, but it doesn't mean they have to love you back. Some people take advantage of love. You expressed this really well here. I have closed the door a number of times. Currently it's bolted lol
Thanks for this
Thanks for this
