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Be an Angel
Sorry to piss on peoples cheerios
for some, this is a very dark time of year
a very lonely and sadness filled
what increases more than any time of year
thoughts of morbidity and committing suicide
If everyone does at least one visit to
a person lonely and vulnerable they will give
the one gift that everyone needs
Love, Hope and faith to carry on
all wrapped up in a bow
called life
try to save at least one
I can feel the darkness rolling in
like an almost unstoppable force
it seeps under the floorboards
getting through draughty window frames
getting in to and through the keyhole
creating the walls porous and foggy
you are the central point
it creeps steadily towards you
touching your feet then up to your knees
blanketing your knees and waistline
painful and as it comes up to your chest
slowly up your neck starting to strangle
it is vital you don't swallow
If you swallow you are lost
you will be drowned in the darkness
Something to have by your phone
people you can phone when you're alone
A relative, a friend, a pastor or organisation
that does not want you life to end
if you need a couple of brandies for courage
then do so, then pick up the phone
no help from the first one
call the second one then the third one
just don't give up and keep calling
even when weeping and bawling
there are angels of mercy out there
not many for they are quite rare.
My Christmas wish for you is that you
find an angel of mercy
and much-needed rescue
everyone can play there part
all you need is a genuine heart
love and light be upon you all
but remember caring
for humans and puppies
is not just for Christmas
for some, this is a very dark time of year
a very lonely and sadness filled
what increases more than any time of year
thoughts of morbidity and committing suicide
If everyone does at least one visit to
a person lonely and vulnerable they will give
the one gift that everyone needs
Love, Hope and faith to carry on
all wrapped up in a bow
called life
try to save at least one
I can feel the darkness rolling in
like an almost unstoppable force
it seeps under the floorboards
getting through draughty window frames
getting in to and through the keyhole
creating the walls porous and foggy
you are the central point
it creeps steadily towards you
touching your feet then up to your knees
blanketing your knees and waistline
painful and as it comes up to your chest
slowly up your neck starting to strangle
it is vital you don't swallow
If you swallow you are lost
you will be drowned in the darkness
Something to have by your phone
people you can phone when you're alone
A relative, a friend, a pastor or organisation
that does not want you life to end
if you need a couple of brandies for courage
then do so, then pick up the phone
no help from the first one
call the second one then the third one
just don't give up and keep calling
even when weeping and bawling
there are angels of mercy out there
not many for they are quite rare.
My Christmas wish for you is that you
find an angel of mercy
and much-needed rescue
everyone can play there part
all you need is a genuine heart
love and light be upon you all
but remember caring
for humans and puppies
is not just for Christmas
Published 24th Dec 2019
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24th Dec 2019 7:09pm
Hey David, thanks for expressing your Christmas spirit, lol. I guess not everyone enjoys the holidays, eh? Thanks for the inspirational message, though. Luckily, I am not feeling that way, but I'm sure you are speaking to someone here. Hold on... Reach out
24th Dec 2019 7:43pm
I felt that way the last two Christmases - this year I am prepared for battle :-))))))))
thank you - I hope I am speaking to everyone in here to save a life this Christmas it can be as easy as a hug.
David :-)))))))))
thank you - I hope I am speaking to everyone in here to save a life this Christmas it can be as easy as a hug.
David :-)))))))))
24th Dec 2019 7:10pm
24th Dec 2019 7:40pm
you will be blessed for your actions if only by the experiencing the saving of a life :-)))))))))
24th Dec 2019 10:29pm
25th Dec 2019 00:02am
Hello David
This is the sort of piece I enjoy reading, especially during this time of year.
Thank you for posting, and may you have a peaceful holiday season, my friend.
Teri
This is the sort of piece I enjoy reading, especially during this time of year.
Thank you for posting, and may you have a peaceful holiday season, my friend.
Teri
1st Jan 2020 11:40am
thank you so much Teri :-)))))))))
I hope you have a blessed New Year full of light and love :-)))))))
I hope you have a blessed New Year full of light and love :-)))))))
25th Dec 2019 11:10am
Dear D,
Great message for a season that can sometimes be exceptionally lonely for many.
“If everyone does at least one visit to
a person lonely and vulnerable they will give
the one gift that everyone needs
Love, Hope and faith to carry on
all wrapped up in a bow
called life ” I think you’ve summed it up brilliantly here!
I wish you a Merry Christmas in the meantime and will start mine sending you a virtual hug H🌷
Great message for a season that can sometimes be exceptionally lonely for many.
“If everyone does at least one visit to
a person lonely and vulnerable they will give
the one gift that everyone needs
Love, Hope and faith to carry on
all wrapped up in a bow
called life ” I think you’ve summed it up brilliantly here!
I wish you a Merry Christmas in the meantime and will start mine sending you a virtual hug H🌷
1st Jan 2020 1:53pm
I am so very grateful for your input and comments - they always raise my spirits which isn't always an easy thing to do. My wish for you to have blessings, light, and love as a reward for your kindness :-)))))))
(((((((((( Huge Scottish Bear Hugs ))))))))))))
(((((((((( Huge Scottish Bear Hugs ))))))))))))
26th Dec 2019 5:40pm
There is nothing to apologize for when you pour from the raw unabashed depths of your heart. You will always have a friend in me.
I would love it if you would send us an audio of this poem to the podcast, If you would be interested, please include the title of the work and your screen name and send to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
In kindness,
Daniel
I would love it if you would send us an audio of this poem to the podcast, If you would be interested, please include the title of the work and your screen name and send to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
In kindness,
Daniel
1st Jan 2020 1:57pm
I am really stoked by your friendship, love, and support - you always know the right thing to say - you have my loyal friendship in return :-)
I will try and record this one soon :-))))))
Thank you :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))
I will try and record this one soon :-))))))
Thank you :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))
27th Dec 2019 9:22pm
David, you seem to have the right words at the right time. Love and respect with a million hugs.
1st Jan 2020 1:59pm
your comments make me smile so much and I am so very grateful for them :-)))))))))))))))
(((((((((( 1 Trillion Warm ScottishHugs )))))))))) :-))))))))))
(((((((((( 1 Trillion Warm ScottishHugs )))))))))) :-))))))))))
28th Dec 2019 2:41am
1st Jan 2020 2:01pm
I was also writing it as a reminder to myself - we need to spread the love especially at this time of the year <3 :-)
thank you so much for your comment :-))))))))))))
thank you so much for your comment :-))))))))))))
