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My Loving Petunia <3
Such gentle, beautiful actions
Lovely, luxurious hair
Swaying gently in my dreams
Soft and sweet
Sweeping my worries away
I feel doubt and insecurity
With a simple sentence
She washes them away each time
I know the fear is unfounded
But I fear it is all a dream
That it shall shatter with a simple touch
Yet something tells me that nothing can break this bond
Something deep inside says that we can last
We can last till each draws their last breath.
Lovely, luxurious hair
Swaying gently in my dreams
Soft and sweet
Sweeping my worries away
I feel doubt and insecurity
With a simple sentence
She washes them away each time
I know the fear is unfounded
But I fear it is all a dream
That it shall shatter with a simple touch
Yet something tells me that nothing can break this bond
Something deep inside says that we can last
We can last till each draws their last breath.
Published 9th Dec 2019
Author's Note
If there is something that I'm most thankful for in this world, it is the love and care that I recieve from My Sweet Loving Petunia.
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21st Jan 2020 1:45pm
Such beautiful love poem, deathnadders! So heartfelt and sweet... Straight from the heart ❤️
"Sweeping my worries away
I feel doubt and insecurity
With a simple sentence
She washes them away each time"
Love will do that to ya' :)
P.s.
I couldn't help but to notice your profile picture. I believe that is one of Beksinski's paintings? I don't know if you have any interest in him, or you just happened to like the pic, but I wrote a poem about him that you might be interested in...
Best wishes,
-NewB
"Sweeping my worries away
I feel doubt and insecurity
With a simple sentence
She washes them away each time"
Love will do that to ya' :)
P.s.
I couldn't help but to notice your profile picture. I believe that is one of Beksinski's paintings? I don't know if you have any interest in him, or you just happened to like the pic, but I wrote a poem about him that you might be interested in...
Best wishes,
-NewB
1st Feb 2020 11:16am
I love Beksinki and a whole host of Polish painters. They're all so morbidly fascinating. I'll read your poem for sure.
19th Sep 2020 6:56pm
I have felt at times something is simply too good to be true... But then again... maybe good it is.
19th Sep 2020 7:05pm
