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All the Years
Being of age, I understand now
why dearly departed elders
spoke so highly of home cooking—
How they could taste Autumn
in a bowl of butternut squash soup
harvested from their own garden—
or smell a campfire
of freshly chopped birch
in an oven-roasted turkey—
witness sunrise dripping
into a rising ocean glass
of freshly squeezed oranges—
feel Love circling the home
in aromas of breakfast casserole
and freshly ground coffee
I have learned beyond doubt
that solid bonds form
when gathering to break bread—
it’s the first thing we're taught
at birth from a heated bottle;
or, a Madonna's breastful of warm milk
~
why dearly departed elders
spoke so highly of home cooking—
How they could taste Autumn
in a bowl of butternut squash soup
harvested from their own garden—
or smell a campfire
of freshly chopped birch
in an oven-roasted turkey—
witness sunrise dripping
into a rising ocean glass
of freshly squeezed oranges—
feel Love circling the home
in aromas of breakfast casserole
and freshly ground coffee
I have learned beyond doubt
that solid bonds form
when gathering to break bread—
it’s the first thing we're taught
at birth from a heated bottle;
or, a Madonna's breastful of warm milk
~
Author's Note
Happy Thanks for Giving 2019 DUPeeps—
I appreciate you each ♥️
I appreciate you each ♥️
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Re. All the Years
28th Nov 2019 6:35am
Wow a near Synchronicity for me with Your spill, here
as i was reading up on Wampanoag Thanksgiving!
http://www.manyhoops.com/wampanoag-on-thanksgiving.html?fbclid=IwAR3CK4sRmOZgB4kS-F4SeEmibSCQX4h_5c-34PIA1E6Wxa8cBhXXvHrIU1E
& Your spill, here could be right along side the Native American Prayers for Thanksgiving!!
Spiritually Beautiful
http://www.manyhoops.com/native-american-prayers-for-thanksgiving.html
as i was reading up on Wampanoag Thanksgiving!
http://www.manyhoops.com/wampanoag-on-thanksgiving.html?fbclid=IwAR3CK4sRmOZgB4kS-F4SeEmibSCQX4h_5c-34PIA1E6Wxa8cBhXXvHrIU1E
& Your spill, here could be right along side the Native American Prayers for Thanksgiving!!
Spiritually Beautiful
http://www.manyhoops.com/native-american-prayers-for-thanksgiving.html
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Re: Re. All the Years
28th Nov 2019 6:09pm
Thank you for sharing those links, Tallen! I truly appreciate them! Thanks for Giving today, my friend!
Re. All the Years
28th Nov 2019 6:48am
I’ve always thought of eating with someone, enjoying their company, was akin to a spiritual practice, and this just reaffirms that belief. It has me recalling memories of my grandmother’s kitchen the wee hours of the morning before the sun came up on any holiday. She would rise and say her prayers and then get down to the business of putting on a spread for her house. By mid morning, all the cousins and aunts had joined the party and the conversations that were had were so rich and full of laughter. Thank you for this beautiful ode to those precious moments and the ones to come. I raise my hot cider to toast the legacy we leave behind from our kitchens full of love and magic 💜. Happy Thanksgiving.
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There is absolutely something spiritually divine about gathering with friends or family over a good meal. Potluck is my favorite.
My mother always stayed up way past midnight cooking the pies and desserts, and prepared the casseroles for the oven, so they'd be out of the way, I woke up more than once to the house smelled divine.
Thank you for your kind comments, Luna. I truly appreciated them. Thanks for Giving today, my friend!
My mother always stayed up way past midnight cooking the pies and desserts, and prepared the casseroles for the oven, so they'd be out of the way, I woke up more than once to the house smelled divine.
Thank you for your kind comments, Luna. I truly appreciated them. Thanks for Giving today, my friend!
Re. All the Years
28th Nov 2019 9:26am
Dear A,
There is nothing more joyful than breaking bread and creating loving memories with loved ones.
Of course, if this isn’t ones experience than it’s just another Thursday. However, your shout out to members of the DU, new and established, is the lovliest way to kick off this holiday. Thank you. ❤️
Now, I’m off to start the American version of this repast before we ramp it up with the addition of the Italian rendition.
Your thoughtfulness in this write is very loving. Happy Thanksgiving! H🌷
There is nothing more joyful than breaking bread and creating loving memories with loved ones.
Of course, if this isn’t ones experience than it’s just another Thursday. However, your shout out to members of the DU, new and established, is the lovliest way to kick off this holiday. Thank you. ❤️
Now, I’m off to start the American version of this repast before we ramp it up with the addition of the Italian rendition.
Your thoughtfulness in this write is very loving. Happy Thanksgiving! H🌷
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28th Nov 2019 6:14pm
Thanks for Giving today, Honoria! Just like memories, words can last a lifetime, particularly those spoken in gratitude.
Thank you for your kindness and support. They are both truly appreciated. Have a safe and blessed holiday!
Thank you for your kindness and support. They are both truly appreciated. Have a safe and blessed holiday!
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2019 10:23am
This poem fills the stomach as much as it warms the heart; or perhaps the other way around. It's Truth heaped on a plate and dished out of a pie tin.
Happy Thanksgiving, Darling! 💙👫💋
And may everyone here experience this poem in the comforts of a warm home, adding to their eventual food coma!
Happy Thanksgiving, Darling! 💙👫💋
And may everyone here experience this poem in the comforts of a warm home, adding to their eventual food coma!
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28th Nov 2019 6:15pm
Thank you for Giving today, Sweetheart! 💙👫💋
I deeply appreciate your love and support always!
I deeply appreciate your love and support always!
Re. All the Years
28th Nov 2019 2:11pm
Oooh - a rather delicious engaging of the senses. I particularly enjoyed
that solid bonds form
when gathering to break bread—
because the is the pairing of "... bonds form ... " with "... bread break".
One small observation. Perhaps "spoke so much of home cooking— " is a little weak in respect of "so much", because there is opportunity here to maybe give a qualitative aspect instead of quantitive. Something like
"spoke reverently ..."
"spoke with delight ..."
"spoke with warm affection ..."
or even combine quantitive with qualitative
"spoke at length with affection..."
SeaCat.
that solid bonds form
when gathering to break bread—
because the is the pairing of "... bonds form ... " with "... bread break".
One small observation. Perhaps "spoke so much of home cooking— " is a little weak in respect of "so much", because there is opportunity here to maybe give a qualitative aspect instead of quantitive. Something like
"spoke reverently ..."
"spoke with delight ..."
"spoke with warm affection ..."
or even combine quantitive with qualitative
"spoke at length with affection..."
SeaCat.
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Re: Re. All the Years
28th Nov 2019 5:42pm
I chose highly to add some alliteration to home. Thank you for the suggestion, it does read much ( no pun intended ) better.
Happy Thanksgiving!
Happy Thanksgiving!
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I omitted to wish you happy thanksgiving; hope that it was totally happy for you and yours :)
I’m not in USA - but thank you for your good thanksgiving wishes nonetheless :)
I’m not in USA - but thank you for your good thanksgiving wishes nonetheless :)
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30th Nov 2019 11:13pm
Thank you, SeaCat! Thanksgiving should be every day when it comes to giving to others!
Re. All the Years
28th Nov 2019 2:30pm
Happy Thanksgiving! My 17 yo is coming over to roast a duck with us today. Big artist in her own place.... stocked her fridge to drive out to us!
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28th Nov 2019 6:16pm
Thanks for Giving today, EW! Thank you for your support, and enjoy your family time!
Re. All the Years
28th Nov 2019 2:31pm
Re. All the Years
We don't have Thanksgiving down here in Ozland...but we do have Sunday roast dinners lol...just a beautiful image of what a home should be Ahavati...and as I love cooking for my wife and friends your ink hit me gently in the heart.
Everything is happening all at once...Harry
Oh...and Happy Thanksgiving to you and Johnny.
Everything is happening all at once...Harry
Oh...and Happy Thanksgiving to you and Johnny.
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28th Nov 2019 9:16pm
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2019 4:29am
Awe Avahati.......this is beautiful.....brought back so many memories.......hope you had a great Thanksgiving.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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1st Dec 2019 5:43pm
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Re: Re. All the Years
1st Dec 2019 5:46pm
Welcome and thank you, Didi3d! I remember huge family dinners and small gatherings that were always so festive around a table filled with family and friends. I appreciate your presence. 🙏😘🌹
Re. All the Years
1st Dec 2019 9:45pm
So true, but difficult to imagine hsppening in 21st century hectic London, UK.
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1st Dec 2019 10:33pm
Thank you, Lozzamus. The world does seem too busy for what matters in today's times, despite the conveniences of modern inventions.
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2nd Dec 2019 7:11pm
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Re. All the Years
4th Dec 2019 7:51pm
so sorry i missed this back on thanksgiving. what a blessing of a poem :heart: for me, as a brit, it reminds me more of xmastime but now i've had a couple of thanksgivings under my belt, too... as the scales will attest to :blush: feeding a family, watching them enjoy the food, the company, the time out in this busy world=priceless
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4th Dec 2019 7:56pm
Thank you, butters. It's a wonderful holiday celebrating the harvest of not just fruits of the field, but personal self as well.
I appreciate you.
I appreciate you.
Re. All the Years
5th Dec 2019 00:46am
I’m sad I missed this during Thanksgiving. It is just masterful. As soon as I came to the last line - chills - because I understood, from the very beginning.
This poem is pure love and warmth. I loved the imagery. A holiday masterpiece, Ahavati...
This poem is pure love and warmth. I loved the imagery. A holiday masterpiece, Ahavati...
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5th Dec 2019 11:06am
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6th Dec 2019 3:33am
Can’t say I can recall warm breast milk, but I’d sure love to say that I could lol... anywho, it was per usual... outstanding! ✌🏾
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6th Dec 2019 3:15pm
LOL! Thank you, PoeticOne! I appreciate you, and am so happy to see your return!
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6th Dec 2019 6:55pm
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Re: Re. All the Years
22nd Dec 2019 3:26pm
Thank you, Dhyana! There is something so warming about entering a home that smells of baking bread - then cracking the loaf amid friends. And, yes. betrayal is more difficult after that because it implies a more intimate trust; however, it's our opportunity to grow by letting go and moving on.
Thank you for a lovely comment. I hope your pain eases through forgiveness and moving forward this holiday season. xo
Thank you for a lovely comment. I hope your pain eases through forgiveness and moving forward this holiday season. xo