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We are not to be confused of wants, of needs,
of desire
what sits upon the tip of tongue
dancing autonomously in the wind
but still
tethered to a branch
not old, not young
waiting for release, for a life,
not yet begun
what sets us free,
gives us flight, fancy
slowing of gravity pulling us down
elevation
instilling invigoration
is it love?
where we are floating through air
where pain has gone and disappeared
I am the window, you such as light
warm up the scullery
let your sun clean my night
etch circles of crystal
in jade prisms with care
beveled with yearning
where hearts will appear
soft strokes of cheek
blushed with brushed lips so so ripe
render me worthy
of this rich beauty's life
of desire
what sits upon the tip of tongue
dancing autonomously in the wind
but still
tethered to a branch
not old, not young
waiting for release, for a life,
not yet begun
what sets us free,
gives us flight, fancy
slowing of gravity pulling us down
elevation
instilling invigoration
is it love?
where we are floating through air
where pain has gone and disappeared
I am the window, you such as light
warm up the scullery
let your sun clean my night
etch circles of crystal
in jade prisms with care
beveled with yearning
where hearts will appear
soft strokes of cheek
blushed with brushed lips so so ripe
render me worthy
of this rich beauty's life
Published 27th Nov 2019
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27th Nov 2019 6:39pm
Once again this site amazes me...wtf is extreme about this poem....I'm done with this place...so long to those friends I've made over the past three years. So sad so so sad
27th Nov 2019 6:42pm
This is not extreme content and whoever thinks it is needs an education...a real monkey's ass
27th Nov 2019 7:28pm
Brother,
i agree with You.
it's like my spill:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/342571-canoodling-skyward/
it's a description about French Kissing
but beyond me how some read something else!!
Can You not at least stay as an
@ Large DU Poet?
You know i am gonna miss You a lot.
i agree with You.
it's like my spill:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/342571-canoodling-skyward/
it's a description about French Kissing
but beyond me how some read something else!!
Can You not at least stay as an
@ Large DU Poet?
You know i am gonna miss You a lot.
27th Nov 2019 9:28pm
Don't go Tim...I'm sure it can be fixed my friend...I don't care for 'R' rating in any form where art is concerned. This is a truly beautiful poem my friend...it sings to one's heart...to one's soul.
Balance & Harmony...Harry
Balance & Harmony...Harry
27th Nov 2019 9:40pm
Tim, it's not DU! There are new laws in place to protect minors! Certain keywords or genres trigger the warning. A moderator can undo it if you let them know. It's happening all over the site. It's nothing personal toward you ( nor any other poet ); it's to protect the site from legal action.
Please don't go! I agree with Harry regarding balance and harmony!
Happy Thanksgiving!
Please don't go! I agree with Harry regarding balance and harmony!
Happy Thanksgiving!
27th Nov 2019 10:55pm
Tim, Madame addressed this in a thread a while back. Here is the link: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/11077/#458731
29th Nov 2019 10:18am
Maybe if there was a list of words it would be okay but I can't for the life of me find one offensive/extreme trigger word
28th Nov 2019 00:29am
I love the beauty and want that’s splayed gorgeously throughput this piece of writing !
A beautiful reflection... 🔥🔥🔥
A beautiful reflection... 🔥🔥🔥
