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Bliss
Captivated in his gaze
Willingly enchanted
Body shivers in anticipation
Yearning for intense passion
Seduced, powerless
Fierce passion consuming
Ravished, euphoric, unexpected bliss
***A huge thank you to David_Macleod and Ely E.A.Rothwell who critiqued my poem in the forum. I appreciate the feedback I was given***
20/11/19
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Copyright Council 2019”
Willingly enchanted
Body shivers in anticipation
Yearning for intense passion
Seduced, powerless
Fierce passion consuming
Ravished, euphoric, unexpected bliss
***A huge thank you to David_Macleod and Ely E.A.Rothwell who critiqued my poem in the forum. I appreciate the feedback I was given***
20/11/19
“© Australian
Copyright Council 2019”
Published 19th Nov 2019
| Edited 13th Jan 2020
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2019 10:09pm
A classy, accessible, romantic piece! Very nice!~
20th Nov 2019 6:39am
Romantic - a good picture of the moment her knees go weak.
With a name like Joybell a poem titled Bliss would be an apt one for you to produce.
With a name like Joybell a poem titled Bliss would be an apt one for you to produce.
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2nd Jan 2020 11:27am
one can feel the gaze, the trance.
enjoyed your expression.
thanks for sharing your bliss
enjoyed your expression.
thanks for sharing your bliss
Anonymous
7th Dec 2020 4:25pm
Your words melted my face. The human experience of giving one's self over - naked - to another. "intense passion, powerless, ravished, euphoric" - jesus, this is sex - a back and forth between giving and receiving - between controlling and receiving. Spectacular.
1st Jan 2022 2:17pm
Hello Joy,
The union in a a perfect moment filled with intense passion and play to the point where we have no regret but ultimate feelings of bliss. I had been there. Well expression moment. Three cheers.
Passionately yours,
KS
The union in a a perfect moment filled with intense passion and play to the point where we have no regret but ultimate feelings of bliss. I had been there. Well expression moment. Three cheers.
Passionately yours,
KS
